Fall On Your Knees

Crispy leaves shaded in whiskey and gold,   
gamboling never gets old.
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Date: 9/17/2025 11:31:00 PM
Aw, so sweet! I love the autumn. I want to be where I can see the changing colors and fall on my knees in the crispy golden leaves!
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Date: 9/6/2025 12:10:00 AM
A beautiful Autumn poem!!
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Date: 9/6/2025 5:00:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed the poem for Autumn dear Daisy, one of my fav flower is your name !
Date: 9/5/2025 11:55:00 AM
I frowned, then looked up gamboling and thoroughly smiled, loving the write just as I love to frolic, frisk and play. LOVE imagery of whiskey and gold. Poetry hugs ... CaayCay
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Date: 9/6/2025 5:00:00 AM
Yes its a new word for me too lol, glad I made you smile dear
Date: 9/5/2025 4:59:00 AM
I can remember this, though I did not wear a skirt:) Leaves did not seem to care, happy to snuggle with innocence. I recall pressing some leaves in a book. Lovely imagery.
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Date: 9/6/2025 4:59:00 AM
I'm glad you had a chance at childhood fun Joe, its such a blessing to remember it, isn't it !
Date: 9/4/2025 11:43:00 AM
Creative poem. Fun to wade in autumn fallen leaves.
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Date: 9/6/2025 4:59:00 AM
Yes it is Jay, thanks for reading it
Date: 9/4/2025 8:20:00 AM
Dear Mystic, this is a creative crystalline. Great picture.
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Date: 9/4/2025 11:33:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed it Victor
Date: 9/3/2025 5:17:00 PM
sublime Crystalline, dear Rose! hugs & blessings, Sara
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Date: 9/3/2025 6:33:00 PM
might as well add a dashy new word heh, hope they like it
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