Fall On Your Knees

Crispy leaves shaded in whiskey and gold,   
gamboling never gets old.
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Legros Kelley Avatar
September 17, 2025 at 11:31 PM
Aw, so sweet! I love the autumn. I want to be where I can see the changing colors and fall on my knees in the crispy golden leaves!
Meadows Avatar
September 6, 2025 at 12:10 AM
A beautiful Autumn poem!!
Rose  Avatar
September 6, 2025 at 5:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed the poem for Autumn dear Daisy, one of my fav flower is your name !
Godwin Avatar
September 5, 2025 at 11:55 AM
I frowned, then looked up gamboling and thoroughly smiled, loving the write just as I love to frolic, frisk and play. LOVE imagery of whiskey and gold. Poetry hugs ... CaayCay
Rose  Avatar
September 6, 2025 at 5:00 AM
Yes its a new word for me too lol, glad I made you smile dear
DiMino Avatar
September 5, 2025 at 4:59 AM
I can remember this, though I did not wear a skirt:) Leaves did not seem to care, happy to snuggle with innocence. I recall pressing some leaves in a book. Lovely imagery.
Rose  Avatar
September 6, 2025 at 4:59 AM
I'm glad you had a chance at childhood fun Joe, its such a blessing to remember it, isn't it !
Narain Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 11:43 AM
Creative poem. Fun to wade in autumn fallen leaves.
Rose  Avatar
September 6, 2025 at 4:59 AM
Yes it is Jay, thanks for reading it
Buhagiar Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 8:20 AM
Dear Mystic, this is a creative crystalline. Great picture.
Rose  Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 11:33 AM
Glad you enjoyed it Victor
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 5:17 PM
sublime Crystalline, dear Rose! hugs & blessings, Sara
Rose  Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 6:33 PM
might as well add a dashy new word heh, hope they like it
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