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Effervescent

“conjoined with the whole

we play our life role

exuding a scent

granting love consent"

Pheromones bloom between brown eyes
Baritone voice meets satin sultry cries
Excitedly engaged on a hot summer night 
With only an owl as high as hearts fly

Silver souls that grow so close and dear
The moon is aglow bringing lovers cheer
And oh how we toast with champagne near
This love is gold we have no fear 

Destiny guides us in our endeavors 
Like kites flies us in love forever
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 9/18/2025 10:30:00 PM
I love "We play our life role" and Destiny guides us in our endeavors". Always enjoy reading your poetry.
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Date: 9/9/2025 6:14:00 AM
The richness of your first lines drew me in. Such a deep and lovely Roman write!
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Karen Jones
Date: 9/14/2025 5:23:00 AM
Aw thanks Kim!
Date: 9/8/2025 11:04:00 AM
Written with breathtaking, gold laced ink .. sigh a wonderful sigh take I. CayCay
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Karen Jones
Date: 9/8/2025 11:15:00 AM
You are kind CayCay and thanks!
Date: 9/7/2025 4:04:00 AM
brilliantly essayed with huge congrats, karen...i'm ok with you including my poem in your book...if requirements are not fully done, i'm fine with it too...darn email issues! huggs
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Karen Jones
Date: 9/7/2025 11:01:00 PM
Thanks for congratulating me and sure thing. Higgs returned
Date: 9/7/2025 3:26:00 AM
An exquisite write my dear poet friend, Karen! Belated Congratulations on your win! Thanks a lot for sharing! God bless you always and take care! Hugs
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Karen Jones
Date: 9/7/2025 11:02:00 PM
Thanks and bless you ten fold Len
Date: 9/5/2025 1:38:00 PM
What a wonderful "Effervescent" write. Love it and your ending. "Good Luck" Have a lovely day/weekend writing away............
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Karen Jones
Date: 9/7/2025 11:00:00 PM
Thanks Paula!
Date: 9/3/2025 4:45:00 AM
Dear Karen, I can feel the romantic beauty of the night you describe. Enjoyed this golden love that knows no fear. Congratulations on your win in this Premiere contest.
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Karen Jones
Date: 9/3/2025 4:59:00 AM
I appreciate that Valsa!
Date: 9/3/2025 4:25:00 AM
The combination of lush language and lyrical undertones creates a picturesque night. Congrats on your win
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Karen Jones
Date: 9/3/2025 4:58:00 AM
Thank you Sotto!
Date: 9/2/2025 9:38:00 PM
Rich words combine with romantic overtones and a beautiful evening is formed. Good luck with the contest.
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Karen Jones
Date: 9/2/2025 10:16:00 PM
I appreciate you Hilda!
Date: 9/2/2025 7:28:00 PM
I find this exhilarating! I can't figure why no one else does yet... Oh, well. To each his own, I guess. This poem simply sparkles, Karen. :) gw
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/14/2025 8:04:00 PM
Now, 12 days later, I see that people have caught on to this poem's special magic. Good!
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Karen Jones
Date: 9/2/2025 10:16:00 PM
Thanks dearest Gershon!
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