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Effervescent

“conjoined with the whole

we play our life role

exuding a scent

granting love consent"

Pheromones bloom between brown eyes
Baritone voice meets satin sultry cries
Excitedly engaged on a hot summer night 
With only an owl as high as hearts fly

Silver souls that grow so close and dear
The moon is aglow bringing lovers cheer
And oh how we toast with champagne near
This love is gold we have no fear 

Destiny guides us in our endeavors 
Like kites flies us in love forever
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Delegans Avatar
September 18, 2025 at 10:30 PM
I love "We play our life role" and Destiny guides us in our endeavors". Always enjoy reading your poetry.
Jones Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 3:39 PM
I appreciate your enjoying Christopher!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 6:14 AM
The richness of your first lines drew me in. Such a deep and lovely Roman write!
Jones Avatar
September 14, 2025 at 5:23 AM
Aw thanks Kim!
Godwin Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 11:04 AM
Written with breathtaking, gold laced ink .. sigh a wonderful sigh take I. CayCay
Jones Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 11:15 AM
You are kind CayCay and thanks!
Onclaud Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 4:04 AM
brilliantly essayed with huge congrats, karen...i'm ok with you including my poem in your book...if requirements are not fully done, i'm fine with it too...darn email issues! huggs
Jones Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 11:01 PM
Thanks for congratulating me and sure thing. Higgs returned
Gasun Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 3:26 AM
An exquisite write my dear poet friend, Karen! Belated Congratulations on your win! Thanks a lot for sharing! God bless you always and take care! Hugs
Jones Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 11:02 PM
Thanks and bless you ten fold Len
Goldsmith Avatar
September 5, 2025 at 1:38 PM
What a wonderful "Effervescent" write. Love it and your ending. "Good Luck" Have a lovely day/weekend writing away............
Jones Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 11:00 PM
Thanks Paula!
George Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 4:45 AM
Dear Karen, I can feel the romantic beauty of the night you describe. Enjoyed this golden love that knows no fear. Congratulations on your win in this Premiere contest.
Jones Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 4:59 AM
I appreciate that Valsa!
Poet Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 4:25 AM
The combination of lush language and lyrical undertones creates a picturesque night. Congrats on your win
Jones Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 4:58 AM
Thank you Sotto!
Greenhough Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 9:38 PM
Rich words combine with romantic overtones and a beautiful evening is formed. Good luck with the contest.
Jones Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 10:16 PM
I appreciate you Hilda!
Wolf Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 7:28 PM
I find this exhilarating! I can't figure why no one else does yet... Oh, well. To each his own, I guess. This poem simply sparkles, Karen. :) gw
Wolf Avatar
September 14, 2025 at 8:04 PM
Now, 12 days later, I see that people have caught on to this poem's special magic. Good!
Jones Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 10:16 PM
Thanks dearest Gershon!
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