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Dub Bull Too

The bun knee, end, the ham stir 
r ee ting chock oh lit, end watch ching- 'Moo vees!
Kew dueling... 
                    'Two...Geth er, 
                                         uh lone! 


The bunny and the hamster, 
are eating chocolate and watching- 'Movies! 
'Cuddling...
                "Together,
                              alone!

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Victor Buhagiar Date: 8/7/2025 6:00:00 AM An interesting write, full of wit. Login to Reply

CayCay Jennings Date: 8/6/2025 5:19:00 PM I thought you'd lost it or ingested something illegal, then I got to the second stanza and I thought your poem completely precious! LOVE it. 2nd stanza, pretty sure you meant to type 'AND watching.' I can both see them and hear them each time I read it. They get along so well. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 8/6/2025 4:49:00 PM witty and clever Charles! hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 8/6/2025 4:41:00 PM just plain 'ol creative...reading your poem brought a smile to my face. We have bunnies, no hamsters. I think I need to hire you to interpret what the bunnies are saying...you seem to have a gift :-) Login to Reply