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Dub Bull Too

The bun knee, end, the ham stir r ee ting chock oh lit, end watch ching- 'Moo vees! Kew dueling... 'Two...Geth er, uh lone! The bunny and the hamster, are eating chocolate and watching- 'Movies! 'Cuddling... "Together, alone!

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/7/2025 6:00:00 AM

An interesting write, full of wit.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 8/6/2025 5:19:00 PM

I thought you'd lost it or ingested something illegal, then I got to the second stanza and I thought your poem completely precious! LOVE it. 2nd stanza, pretty sure you meant to type 'AND watching.' I can both see them and hear them each time I read it. They get along so well. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Jan Allison

Date: 8/6/2025 4:49:00 PM

witty and clever Charles! hugs jan xx

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/6/2025 4:41:00 PM

just plain 'ol creative...reading your poem brought a smile to my face. We have bunnies, no hamsters. I think I need to hire you to interpret what the bunnies are saying...you seem to have a gift :-)