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Dewfresh Morn

Pain holds its insistence pressed against me I dream of a misty selfless new morn soft as maternal skin easing me free with a true smile to greet a sweet day born!

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Date: 8/1/2025 11:01:00 AM
CayCay, this was beautiful, may you find your dream. Keep up the great work! Ron
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Date: 7/31/2025 12:06:00 PM
This is fantastic work, Caycay. Big congrats and also for your win with Rob. soupmail
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Date: 7/29/2025 9:05:00 PM
This has an aching loveliness. :)
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Date: 7/28/2025 4:49:00 PM
Greeting the day with a smile, Lovely verse
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 7/28/2025 5:03:00 PM
Many thanks ... CayCay
Date: 7/28/2025 7:18:00 AM
Congrats, CayCay! I love the line "new morn as soft as maternal skin". Well done.
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 7/28/2025 5:03:00 PM
Thank you for your encouraging comments, I embrace them. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 7/27/2025 11:08:00 PM
Love this. I can see it...your words took me there.
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 7/28/2025 5:04:00 PM
Thank you, Wayne, I appreciate you. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 7/27/2025 10:28:00 AM
- A wonderful new day ... without pain ... a reason to smile, CayCay :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 7/28/2025 5:05:00 PM
Thank you, Sweetie. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 7/27/2025 8:32:00 AM
So soft and full of feeling—love how it moves from pain to peace so naturally. Really touched me!
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 7/28/2025 5:08:00 PM
Your comments were a pleasure to 'hear' because they feel genuinely sincere. Thank you, Rowena, for sharing your reactions with me, means a lot. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 7/27/2025 5:30:00 AM
A lovely poem with a tinge of pain. Your deep feelings are masterfully delineated. I "dream of a misty selfless new morn soft as maternal skin" . Beautiful analogy. Congratulations on your win, dear Cay Cay !
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 7/28/2025 5:08:00 PM
Thank you, Valsa. CayCay
Date: 7/27/2025 3:54:00 AM
Filled with deep emotion. Don't we all from time to time wish for such an event. I hope this Sunday will be perfect for you. Sara K
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 7/28/2025 5:09:00 PM
Love the personal feel in your comments. Thank you, Sara. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 7/26/2025 6:16:00 PM
Wow, dear CayCay, love this beautiful poem! The writing is exquisite and the imagery is beautiful! How mindful and deep this poem is and the way you've put your feelings into this is just beyond brilliant!
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Anne Winter
Date: 7/27/2025 5:36:00 AM
Aww thank you so much, you are the best, luv u so much <3
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 7/27/2025 3:21:00 AM
Thank you very much, Anne. Your words warm me in a cuddle (I promise I've never said that to anyone else it just now popped forth from nowhere, kind of cool, a word cuddle) Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 7/26/2025 4:38:00 PM
outstanding CayCay! I love your unique take on the contest...it has the depth she's looking for...best wishes with the contest
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 7/26/2025 4:46:00 PM
I have never cast a poem and caught a keeper that quick before! I thank you for such a delightful appearance and poem enthusiasm, I sincerely appreciate both. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

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