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July- 26- 2025

Vibrations from a Verso Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Nette Onclaud

~Placed Second~

On a fine spring morning saw dew drops GLEAM They shone like glass globules Some rested COOL on slender leaves of grass Gems they did SEEM But in time they vanished pliant to RULE!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/31/2025 12:04:00 PM

back with my congrats. Well done, Valsa.

Rowena Velasco

Date: 7/27/2025 8:36:00 AM

Such a graceful glimpse of nature’s quiet wisdom! The dew’s gentle surrender to time’s rule is both beautiful and bittersweet. Loved the gleam and grace in your lines.

Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 7/27/2025 3:14:00 AM

Congratulations, dear Valsa on your win in this contest with a lovely verse depicting the beauty of dew drops gleaming at morn. Just reminds me that all is not gold that gleams. Wishing you a pleasant Sunday.

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/26/2025 7:23:00 PM

Beautiful, Valsa; love fresh mornings, with warmth of sunlight. Vitamin D for free. A gem of a poem. Thank you.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 7/26/2025 4:24:00 PM

I clicked over and for a fraction of a tiny second thought I'd clicked on my own poem because I JUST posted with the same title. I'm not the most alert student in class, I guess! Your write is gorgeous, I enjoyed reading it more than once. Be blessed ... CayCay

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 7/26/2025 4:22:00 PM

excellent poem, Valsa! I love seeing dew on grass and flowers....seeing the earth refreshing itself. Best wishes with the contest...you should do well, hugs, Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/26/2025 11:48:00 AM

What a lovely write you have here. Pretty Picture... "Good Luck" Have a lovely/blessed day writing away...............

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2025 11:22:00 AM

You did well here with the great exclamatory ending

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/26/2025 8:40:00 AM

Short but packed with meaning. Hugs, dear Valsa.

Yann Rolland

Date: 7/26/2025 7:37:00 AM

loved the scenery and sentiments ex^pressed too, could feel it , enjoyed

Anne Winter

Date: 7/26/2025 7:24:00 AM

I love it when snowdrops are covered in dew drops. It's like my mind feels refreshed and rejuvenated. A lovely write, Dear Valsa

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/26/2025 4:58:00 AM

Excellent poem about nature's transitory beauty, especially spring morning dew, dear Valsa. It shows that while some moments may seem valuable and gem-like, they are transient and subject to time. Good luck with the contest

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/26/2025 3:14:00 AM

Isn't the dew or raindrops amazing thing to see upon any plant or object, Valsa. I enjoyed reading this contest entry. It reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K