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July- 26- 2025
Vibrations from a Verso Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Nette Onclaud
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Dew Fresh Morn

On a fine spring morning saw dew drops GLEAM They shone like glass globules Some rested COOL on slender leaves of grass Gems they did SEEM But in time they vanished pliant to RULE!
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Dietrich Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 12:04 PM
back with my congrats. Well done, Valsa.
Velasco Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 8:36 AM
Such a graceful glimpse of nature’s quiet wisdom! The dew’s gentle surrender to time’s rule is both beautiful and bittersweet. Loved the gleam and grace in your lines.
Guptar Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 3:14 AM
Congratulations, dear Valsa on your win in this contest with a lovely verse depicting the beauty of dew drops gleaming at morn. Just reminds me that all is not gold that gleams. Wishing you a pleasant Sunday.
DiMino Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 7:23 PM
Beautiful, Valsa; love fresh mornings, with warmth of sunlight. Vitamin D for free. A gem of a poem. Thank you.
Godwin Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 4:24 PM
I clicked over and for a fraction of a tiny second thought I'd clicked on my own poem because I JUST posted with the same title. I'm not the most alert student in class, I guess! Your write is gorgeous, I enjoyed reading it more than once. Be blessed ... CayCay
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 4:22 PM
excellent poem, Valsa! I love seeing dew on grass and flowers....seeing the earth refreshing itself. Best wishes with the contest...you should do well, hugs, Sara
Goldsmith Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 11:48 AM
What a lovely write you have here. Pretty Picture... "Good Luck" Have a lovely/blessed day writing away...............
Dietrich Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 11:22 AM
You did well here with the great exclamatory ending
Buhagiar Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 8:40 AM
Short but packed with meaning. Hugs, dear Valsa.
Rolland Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 7:37 AM
loved the scenery and sentiments ex^pressed too, could feel it , enjoyed
Winter Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 7:24 AM
I love it when snowdrops are covered in dew drops. It's like my mind feels refreshed and rejuvenated. A lovely write, Dear Valsa
Poet Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 4:58 AM
Excellent poem about nature's transitory beauty, especially spring morning dew, dear Valsa. It shows that while some moments may seem valuable and gem-like, they are transient and subject to time. Good luck with the contest
Kendrick Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 3:14 AM
Isn't the dew or raindrops amazing thing to see upon any plant or object, Valsa. I enjoyed reading this contest entry. It reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
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