Dew Fresh Morn

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July- 26- 2025

Vibrations from a Verso Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Nette Onclaud

On a fine spring morning saw dew drops GLEAM They shone like glass globules Some rested COOL on slender leaves of grass Gems they did SEEM But in time they vanished pliant to RULE!

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/26/2025 8:40:00 AM

Short but packed with meaning. Hugs, dear Valsa.

Yann Rolland

Date: 7/26/2025 7:37:00 AM

loved the scenery and sentiments ex^pressed too, could feel it , enjoyed

Anne Winter

Date: 7/26/2025 7:24:00 AM

I love it when snowdrops are covered in dew drops. It's like my mind feels refreshed and rejuvenated. A lovely write, Dear Valsa

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/26/2025 4:58:00 AM

Excellent poem about nature's transitory beauty, especially spring morning dew, dear Valsa. It shows that while some moments may seem valuable and gem-like, they are transient and subject to time. Good luck with the contest

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/26/2025 3:14:00 AM

Isn't the dew or raindrops amazing thing to see upon any plant or object, Valsa. I enjoyed reading this contest entry. It reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K