Crumbling Cookie I

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Poetic Form: Than Bauk
Inspired: 2024 September 01
Image: N/A

A special-Ty
license pla-Te had
been sen-T to him.

He was ve-Ry
pleased with I-t when
the sh-Ipment came.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/2/2024 1:54:00 PM

Interesting work. These are not so easy to write. I have a really hard time with them and I haven't written one in a long time. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/3/2024 12:29:00 AM

Tricky bit, ex.: 'the'--thee sounds asonance falls on 'e', --the/ah sounds consonance falls on 't', 'tis all Greek to me Sara. Aloha William.