Notes About The Poem

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Poetic Form: Than Bauk
Inspired: 2024 September 01
Image: N/A

Crumbling Cookie I

A special-Ty
license pla-Te had
been sen-T to him.

He was ve-Ry
pleased with I-t when
the sh-Ipment came.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kendrick Avatar
September 2, 2024 at 1:54 PM
Interesting work. These are not so easy to write. I have a really hard time with them and I haven't written one in a long time. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 3, 2024 at 12:29 AM
Tricky bit, ex.: 'the'--thee sounds asonance falls on 'e', --the/ah sounds consonance falls on 't', 'tis all Greek to me Sara. Aloha William.
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