Crappy Haiku

sitting in nature 
waiting for inspiration 
pooped on by a bird


For Matt Caliri’s
I’m Looking At The Haiku In The Mirror Contest

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Jeanette Swan

Date: 12/31/2023 2:51:00 AM

Either that or walking into a spider's web! Thanks for the laugh out loud :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2023 3:04:00 PM

Hilarious!!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 9/1/2023 6:13:00 AM

Thank you!

Matt Caliri

Date: 8/24/2023 8:23:00 PM

Not so "crappy" haiku, you've been awarded HM out of 71 entries!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 8/25/2023 6:39:00 PM

Thank you Matt! I had recently used up my muse writing about writing ku, so when this came to mind and made me giggle I thought someone else might too, thrilled! xomo

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/23/2023 8:52:00 PM

This makes me think of a walk I took on a lovely spring day and hit a spider web head on :) thanks for the giggle~

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 8/25/2023 6:42:00 PM

Ah! Webs used to freak me right out! I have grown appreciation for spiders since but, still a little ew getting caught in it.. just today in fact, and noticed how farI have come lol xomo!

Jeff Connelly

Date: 8/19/2023 7:38:00 AM

That shit is good luck, or so some people believe. Good luck with this hilarious poem Maureen. Hugs

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 8/19/2023 8:35:00 AM

A juvenile bald eagle nailed me this summer, I felt pretty lucky!

John Lawless

Date: 8/19/2023 7:03:00 AM

be grateful a cow didn't pas by....

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 8/19/2023 8:34:00 AM

If they could fly this would be a helluva poem!