Crappy Haiku

sitting in nature 
waiting for inspiration 
pooped on by a bird


For Matt Caliri’s
I’m Looking At The Haiku In The Mirror Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Swan Avatar
December 31, 2023 at 2:51 AM
Either that or walking into a spider's web! Thanks for the laugh out loud :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 3:04 PM
Hilarious!!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 6:13 AM
Thank you!
Caliri Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 8:23 PM
Not so "crappy" haiku, you've been awarded HM out of 71 entries!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 25, 2023 at 6:39 PM
Thank you Matt! I had recently used up my muse writing about writing ku, so when this came to mind and made me giggle I thought someone else might too, thrilled! xomo
Faulkner Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 8:52 PM
This makes me think of a walk I took on a lovely spring day and hit a spider web head on :) thanks for the giggle~
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 25, 2023 at 6:42 PM
Ah! Webs used to freak me right out! I have grown appreciation for spiders since but, still a little ew getting caught in it.. just today in fact, and noticed how farI have come lol xomo!
Connelly Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 7:38 AM
That shit is good luck, or so some people believe. Good luck with this hilarious poem Maureen. Hugs
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 8:35 AM
A juvenile bald eagle nailed me this summer, I felt pretty lucky!
Lawless Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 7:03 AM
be grateful a cow didn't pas by....
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 8:34 AM
If they could fly this would be a helluva poem!
Kitchin Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 3:11 PM
Mo, so funny and clever!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 4:58 PM
Thank you! Delighted:))) xomo
Allison Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 1:46 PM
hahaha love it Mo:-) hugs Jan xx
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 1:55 PM
I shoulda known you would ;), mucho thank you! <3 xomo!
Lane Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 1:42 PM
That's pretty crappy, Mo. But... it was inspiration for writing this Haiku, which is NOT poop!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 2:04 PM
<3
Lane Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 1:55 PM
That's the spirit, Mo!!!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 1:54 PM
I got pooped on by an eagle this summer, I felt pretty special ;), it’s immortalized now! xomo!
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