Corn Pop

Feeling corny
By the sea
Stretched out baby
Please look at me

I got on my shades
Do you think I’m hot
This yellow tan baby
It ain’t store bought

Rub in that butter
Slather me up
If you rub deeply
I’m bound to pop

Sun kissed towels
Baby you and me
Both feeling corny
down by the sea.

Mystic Rose’s Choose one image poetry prompt contest.

Image number one.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 8/2/2025 8:44:00 AM
Dear Richard, the rhythmic, playful and witty spirit of your poem is endearing. Wonderful! Warmest wishes, my poet friend.. ~Susan
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/2/2025 7:32:00 PM
Thanks Susan.
Date: 7/21/2025 2:56:00 PM
Richard, thanks for allowing me to smile more. This is hardly corny, but appropriately warm.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/22/2025 1:01:00 PM
Thanks again Duke.
Date: 7/20/2025 9:40:00 PM
This one read like a song! Hmm, bragging about the tan and the shades perfect!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/20/2025 10:36:00 PM
Thanks for the visit.
Date: 7/18/2025 4:19:00 AM
Love the playful vibe and cheeky wordplay, Richard! ‘Feeling corny by the sea’ perfectly captures that sun-soaked, carefree mood. Bright and lively!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/18/2025 7:26:00 AM
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: 7/17/2025 6:12:00 PM
Seems like I been to this beach before, Richard. Nice entry for the contest, my friend. Good Luck! Bill
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/17/2025 9:23:00 PM
Thanks Bill, a bit of silly fun.
Date: 7/17/2025 2:32:00 AM
Is that corny or some other word that rhymes with it? ;) Mmmmmm... hope he doesn't pop too soon.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/17/2025 6:42:00 AM
Ha, ha, when one is corny that can be a possibility.
Date: 7/16/2025 1:40:00 PM
love the humour here Rick, made me smile! hugs Jan xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/17/2025 6:43:00 AM
Thanks Jan, coming from the Queen of humour, I’ll take that as a win.
Date: 7/16/2025 1:07:00 PM
You and I must be reading the same 'corny jokes for dads and grandads' book, Richard. My kids tell me my jokes are so old and corny that I fell off my dinosaur last time I told them. That's gratitude for you, eh? lol.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/17/2025 6:43:00 AM
Thanks my friend. ??
Date: 7/16/2025 12:43:00 PM
so cute. It reminds me of a meme I saw on FB with two corn on the cobs sitting in sunshine and one has turned into popcorn!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/17/2025 6:44:00 AM
It sounds like the picture Vie posted. Thanks for your visit Andrea.
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