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Come With Me

Come with me, I'll take you to the prom.
You're my heart throb as everyone knows.
Come with me, we'll play through the night, 
And I'll be sure to twinkle your toes.

The girls will look fancy to the max.
They'll all be wearing fabrics of green.
Come with me, oh Adonis himself.
You'll be the hottest guy on the scene.

I'll twinkle your toes, I'll sing to your songs, 
And laugh at the love prompts you say,
Come with me, oh darling, please come.
Youth waits at the dance to run free.

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Valsa George Date: 3/7/2024 3:51:00 AM Youth love to go to night clubs where they can sing and dance. This invitation is so tempting. Lovers spending time at the night club will find it so thrilling. A delightful poem, Hilda. Login to Reply Hilda Greenhough Date: 3/7/2024 6:44:00 AM Thank you.

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 1/19/2024 5:25:00 PM Nice to read this joyous poem, full of youthful exuberance and fun, Hilda. Have a great weekend. Login to Reply Hilda Greenhough Date: 1/19/2024 6:40:00 PM Thanks for reading. Best wishes to you.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/16/2024 5:01:00 AM This is delightful. Login to Reply Hilda Greenhough Date: 1/16/2024 7:14:00 AM Thank you.

Bill Baker Date: 1/15/2024 6:03:00 PM A fun and romantic poem about young love at the prom, Hilda. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us through your poetry. Hugs, Bill Login to Reply Hilda Greenhough Date: 1/15/2024 6:58:00 PM Nice to hear from you. Best wishes.

Bill Baker Date: 1/15/2024 6:01:00 PM A fun and romantic poem about young love at the prom, Hilda. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us through your poetry. Hugs, Bill Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 1/15/2024 4:56:00 PM What a lovely, touching piece of writing, Hilda. Your use of mythical allusions to Adonis and the romantic pleasures you've included in the prom atmosphere is charming. Login to Reply Hilda Greenhough Date: 1/15/2024 5:05:00 PM Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

Gordon Mcconnell Date: 1/15/2024 3:43:00 AM Nice penning Hilda, good rhyme and flow too. Blessings from Scotland,Gordon Login to Reply Hilda Greenhough Date: 1/15/2024 5:34:00 AM Thank you.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 1/15/2024 1:25:00 AM You captured the fun of life. Login to Reply Hilda Greenhough Date: 1/15/2024 5:33:00 AM Yep.

Robert Schatz Date: 1/15/2024 12:00:00 AM It's darling Hilda. So playful. I really enjoyed reading it. "I'll twinkle your toes" Login to Reply Hilda Greenhough Date: 1/15/2024 5:33:00 AM I'm happy you liked it. Thank you for your visit.

Gershon Wolf Date: 1/14/2024 6:35:00 PM Such an interesting write. Seems like, oh, only about a million years ago now that I've thought of 'prom.' Then again, I'm a man... Dance the night away, my friend... Login to Reply Hilda Greenhough Date: 1/14/2024 6:38:00 PM Thank you. It was a fun time.

The Situation Date: 1/14/2024 2:05:00 PM Exactly what I'd want from a girl at that age. Login to Reply Hilda Greenhough Date: 1/14/2024 2:17:00 PM ? Maybe she didn't go to your school. Thanks for reading it.

Peter Rees Date: 1/14/2024 9:39:00 AM Such sweet-talking. Bet it works every time. I enjoyed escaping into this piece. Login to Reply Hilda Greenhough Date: 1/14/2024 9:43:00 AM Naughty moments create poets. Thank you for reading my poem.

Hiya Sharma Date: 1/14/2024 9:33:00 AM Oh quite a beautiful heartwarming write this is, dear Hilda.. Loving the charismatic prom ambience you've created with romantic delights and especially your mythological reference of Adonis is also very creative here..gorgeously written with wonderful wordplay. Enjoyed reading this, sending light and best wishes :) Login to Reply Hilda Greenhough Date: 1/14/2024 9:35:00 AM Thank you. I did go to two proms. I was young and shy.