Hilda Greenhough Poet Rhyme

Come With Me

Come with me, I'll take you to the prom.
You're my heart throb as everyone knows.
Come with me, we'll play through the night, 
And I'll be sure to twinkle your toes.

The girls will look fancy to the max.
They'll all be wearing fabrics of green.
Come with me, oh Adonis himself.
You'll be the hottest guy on the scene.

I'll twinkle your toes, I'll sing to your songs, 
And laugh at the love prompts you say,
Come with me, oh darling, please come.
Youth waits at the dance to run free.

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Valsa George March 7, 2024 at 3:51 AM Youth love to go to night clubs where they can sing and dance. This invitation is so tempting. Lovers spending time at the night club will find it so thrilling. A delightful poem, Hilda. Hilda Greenhough March 7, 2024 at 6:44 AM Thank you.

Evelyn Judy Buehler January 19, 2024 at 5:25 PM Nice to read this joyous poem, full of youthful exuberance and fun, Hilda. Have a great weekend. Hilda Greenhough January 19, 2024 at 6:40 PM Thanks for reading. Best wishes to you.

Richard Lamoureux January 16, 2024 at 5:01 AM This is delightful. Hilda Greenhough January 16, 2024 at 7:14 AM Thank you.

Bill Baker January 15, 2024 at 6:03 PM A fun and romantic poem about young love at the prom, Hilda. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us through your poetry. Hugs, Bill Hilda Greenhough January 15, 2024 at 6:58 PM Nice to hear from you. Best wishes.

Bill Baker January 15, 2024 at 6:01 PM A fun and romantic poem about young love at the prom, Hilda. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us through your poetry. Hugs, Bill

Sotto Poet January 15, 2024 at 4:56 PM What a lovely, touching piece of writing, Hilda. Your use of mythical allusions to Adonis and the romantic pleasures you've included in the prom atmosphere is charming. Hilda Greenhough January 15, 2024 at 5:05 PM Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

Gordon Mcconnell January 15, 2024 at 3:43 AM Nice penning Hilda, good rhyme and flow too. Blessings from Scotland,Gordon Hilda Greenhough January 15, 2024 at 5:34 AM Thank you.

Victor Buhagiar January 15, 2024 at 1:25 AM You captured the fun of life. Hilda Greenhough January 15, 2024 at 5:33 AM Yep.

Robert Schatz January 15, 2024 at 12:00 AM It's darling Hilda. So playful. I really enjoyed reading it. "I'll twinkle your toes" Hilda Greenhough January 15, 2024 at 5:33 AM I'm happy you liked it. Thank you for your visit.

Gershon Wolf January 14, 2024 at 6:35 PM Such an interesting write. Seems like, oh, only about a million years ago now that I've thought of 'prom.' Then again, I'm a man... Dance the night away, my friend... Hilda Greenhough January 14, 2024 at 6:38 PM Thank you. It was a fun time.

The Situation January 14, 2024 at 2:05 PM Exactly what I'd want from a girl at that age. Hilda Greenhough January 14, 2024 at 2:17 PM ? Maybe she didn't go to your school. Thanks for reading it.

Peter Rees January 14, 2024 at 9:39 AM Such sweet-talking. Bet it works every time. I enjoyed escaping into this piece. Hilda Greenhough January 14, 2024 at 9:43 AM Naughty moments create poets. Thank you for reading my poem.

Hiya Sharma January 14, 2024 at 9:33 AM Oh quite a beautiful heartwarming write this is, dear Hilda.. Loving the charismatic prom ambience you've created with romantic delights and especially your mythological reference of Adonis is also very creative here..gorgeously written with wonderful wordplay. Enjoyed reading this, sending light and best wishes :) Hilda Greenhough January 14, 2024 at 9:35 AM Thank you. I did go to two proms. I was young and shy.