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Come With Me

Come with me, I'll take you to the prom. You're my heart throb as everyone knows. Come with me, we'll play through the night, And I'll be sure to twinkle your toes. The girls will look fancy to the max. They'll all be wearing fabrics of green. Come with me, oh Adonis himself. You'll be the hottest guy on the scene. I'll twinkle your toes, I'll sing to your songs, And laugh at the love prompts you say, Come with me, oh darling, please come. Youth waits at the dance to run free.

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Valsa George

Date: 3/7/2024 3:51:00 AM

Youth love to go to night clubs where they can sing and dance. This invitation is so tempting. Lovers spending time at the night club will find it so thrilling. A delightful poem, Hilda.

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/7/2024 6:44:00 AM

Thank you.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/19/2024 5:25:00 PM

Nice to read this joyous poem, full of youthful exuberance and fun, Hilda. Have a great weekend.

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/19/2024 6:40:00 PM

Thanks for reading. Best wishes to you.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/17/2024 3:54:00 PM

Hilda, I hope the answer was yes. You clearly remember the strong feelings of youth. The influence of attraction on a young brain has almost no limit. No wonder our species is increasing.

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/17/2024 5:07:00 PM

I didn't have an ending. Yours sounds good. Thanks for commenting.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/16/2024 5:01:00 AM

This is delightful.

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/16/2024 7:14:00 AM

Thank you.

Bill Baker

Date: 1/15/2024 6:03:00 PM

A fun and romantic poem about young love at the prom, Hilda. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us through your poetry. Hugs, Bill

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/15/2024 6:58:00 PM

Nice to hear from you. Best wishes.

Bill Baker

Date: 1/15/2024 6:01:00 PM

A fun and romantic poem about young love at the prom, Hilda. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us through your poetry. Hugs, Bill

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/15/2024 4:56:00 PM

What a lovely, touching piece of writing, Hilda. Your use of mythical allusions to Adonis and the romantic pleasures you've included in the prom atmosphere is charming.

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/15/2024 5:05:00 PM

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 1/15/2024 3:43:00 AM

Nice penning Hilda, good rhyme and flow too. Blessings from Scotland,Gordon

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/15/2024 5:34:00 AM

Thank you.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/15/2024 1:25:00 AM

You captured the fun of life.

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/15/2024 5:33:00 AM

Yep.

Robert Schatz

Date: 1/15/2024 12:00:00 AM

It's darling Hilda. So playful. I really enjoyed reading it. "I'll twinkle your toes"

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/15/2024 5:33:00 AM

I'm happy you liked it. Thank you for your visit.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/14/2024 6:35:00 PM

Such an interesting write. Seems like, oh, only about a million years ago now that I've thought of 'prom.' Then again, I'm a man... Dance the night away, my friend...

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/14/2024 6:38:00 PM

Thank you. It was a fun time.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/14/2024 3:31:00 PM

ah, teenage prom days...!You've captured them well! I was terribly shy and, therefore, attended only one prom. I remember wishing some guy would do as the boy in the last verse. Silly me. Enjoyed this read...have a terrific evening, Sara

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/14/2024 3:39:00 PM

Everyone wants to have fun. Proms were a big deal at my high school. Thank you for your comment. (Jazz clubs in New Orlean are fun too.)

The Situation

Date: 1/14/2024 2:05:00 PM

Exactly what I'd want from a girl at that age.

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/14/2024 2:17:00 PM

? Maybe she didn't go to your school. Thanks for reading it.

Peter Rees

Date: 1/14/2024 9:39:00 AM

Such sweet-talking. Bet it works every time. I enjoyed escaping into this piece.

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/14/2024 9:43:00 AM

Naughty moments create poets. Thank you for reading my poem.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/14/2024 9:33:00 AM

Oh quite a beautiful heartwarming write this is, dear Hilda.. Loving the charismatic prom ambience you've created with romantic delights and especially your mythological reference of Adonis is also very creative here..gorgeously written with wonderful wordplay. Enjoyed reading this, sending light and best wishes :)

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/14/2024 9:35:00 AM

Thank you. I did go to two proms. I was young and shy.