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Choose One

Resentment is like drinking poison and waiting for the other person to die—quote by Carrie Fisher 

You must pick one or the other time has passed
Warning signs have stopped tipped the scales
caution is not priority in here  fairy tales
Why come to this, and all for what?  All or nothing, the game is on
Extraction of Hatred cultivating from dead things,
from the sludge swamp, 
puddles coalesced into shallow streams
Of carbon dense sedimentary that’s been implementing
itself for millions of years emerged from and into our DNA
Tools of angry blames are cutting edge
cunning verbiage out on a ledge
There’s karma mixed in fossil fuels                                     
and, it hunts you    
                            D
                         o
                           w                                         p
                                 n      picks you back     U 

with tongues bit, and blackened lungs
they spit up blood as anthracite burns, 
a cancerous Hurt 
a smoking gun
soiled is the dirt

The chips are down, the cards stacked, and stakes are high
We bet our lives then roll the dice
Resist it’s ply it’ll tug you under
like dominos one by one standing long
stranded in luminal space
‘til the dealer hits or stands
King of hearts or black spade 
winner or loser acts  the ace
On the leaderboard now
but if you must choose
To be wise not to lose your gut
a foggy notion it’ll make you concede
first peel back the layers, wipe off the smut
quiet the lips, make sure it stays shut
fix the rips in tailor made dreams
take a look inside, be the duck 
that oils its feathers so that the water slides
and while the yellow duck
has been plucked from the crowd
and must obey the rules
start the game over
Only you can choose to change
take on a new demeaner
your house is small and ever meaner 
hurting others with humiliating words or spiteful lies
Discompose the cries of the violins 
and beating drums that agitate 
No one ever wins

                                               •  paranoia
                                            •	ticking heart
                                          •	panic attack
                                            •	 insomniac
                                               •  disquiet
                                                    • cry                                                                                                   
When you choose and pick just one
it never matters in the end
this I can contend, that
they are both merely
h  u m a  n
                                             •	Trust In God
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 5/21/2025 10:13:00 PM
I didn't read a poem, no, I went on a journey into a mind of thought that opened my eyes wide with dynamic, original phrases, their delivery woke me up more than a cup of coffee, creative lettering, bullet points - a transport thru varied truths of same theme that I liked too much to care if I ever arrived anywhere. I sit ... I beam ... CayCay
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Date: 5/17/2025 5:21:00 PM
Deep, lessons you have learned, I gather- a beautiful piece
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/17/2025 10:37:00 PM
So many lessons learned, knowing love is still the only answer. Ty,
Date: 5/17/2025 5:34:00 AM
Quite a take on the theme Anaya. I like your description of hate's origins - sludge swamps and dead things. Great use of metaphors throughout. Trying to be the duck... Not easy. But your quote applies. Building up resentment hurts us more than the offender.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/17/2025 10:35:00 PM
Hate destroys all good things, there is no end to the madness. Choose Love! I'm enjoying meandering all over the page, it's freeing. Ty~
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