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a little piece of heaven forever held in a memory 

Once upon a moonbeam you entered precious gold 
like one shooting star the fireworks became the vision 
this picture is framed beyond even words to draw 
It was there a world burned brightest dazzling 
became blinded by reflections flooding back 
generating electric in the soul awakening possessed
Filling the four chambers with warm radiant light 
sparks began to generate deeply powered inside currents 
giving birth to the most radiant pearl of angelic beauty 
Pure as a diamond sparkling within the brightness 
rainbows coloured the radiance that shone through the sparkle 
as wings flutter oceans began to turn the salt through a stream 
Then the river flowed down streaming murmuring forever 
where oceans drank from a salted spiced memory love 
this treasure embraced the broken shell internally healed 
Everywhere I close my eyes thinking of you appearing 
we were destined to meet before the closing of the age 
everyday you awakened the prayers that beg to heaven

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 8/27/2020 11:58:00 AM
- Oh, beautifully described Liam ... but gives me a little sad feeling - Hope everything is well with you and your family :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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