By The Streetlamp

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Sense of taste Poetry Contest- Sponsored by Nette Onclaud

Standing beneath a streetlamp At my hometown country fair An odor so refreshing Was lingering through the air Thinking about my sweetheart With my hands upon her hips And feeling my heart; beating From the flavour of her lips

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/2/2025 9:02:00 AM

I was considering a romantic slant as well. I really like how you did yours, Charles. Congrats on the win

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/30/2025 2:15:00 PM

I love this, upbeat and romance, y e s, hands upon her hips! Best I've read for the contest Charlie. Have a great day__Anaya

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 7/28/2025 4:45:00 PM

a delightful moment you've captured--one with sweet closeness. I suppose you're entering into the contest...good job! best wishes with the contest, enjoy your evening, Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/28/2025 1:34:00 PM

What a creative write/story you have here. Love It... "Good Luck" I also did this contest. Have a lovely/fun day writing away...............

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/28/2025 7:51:00 AM

Charles, this fantastic poem captures a moment of closeness and delight at a hometown fair while exploring nostalgia and passionate love. It highlights the sensory effects of passion and creates longing for a lovely, loving connection.