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Fruity Haiku / Tania Kitchin

Blueberries

fresh picked blueberries
stimulate poetic pens ~
my muse just wants pie

cutedesirefruitfunnymusehaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2025 12:05:00 AM

This is super cute, Caycay. So creative.

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/5/2025 9:47:00 AM

Dear CayCay, such a lively, aromatic, colorful, delicious haiku! "My muse just want pie" too! Your potent haiku stimulates the senses and imagination. Warmest wishes, my dear poet friend.. ~Susan

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/1/2025 4:46:00 AM

Yum. God bless you. love, Gina

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/30/2025 9:27:00 AM

I’ll take a slice! Fave!

Paige Hind

Date: 5/27/2025 4:31:00 PM

LOL!!

CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/28/2025 2:18:00 AM

I thought it was funny, too. Laughed when my muse shared it with me ... CayCay

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/26/2025 6:32:00 PM

Pie, blueberry ink, hmmm the list is endless gl in the contest dear heart :)

CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/28/2025 2:27:00 AM

If I'd had as many slices of blueberry pie as I have blueberry comments my tummy would be yummy full then crummy ruled ... but I do crave one slice as a result of this contest. I'm gonna have to out and get me some ... CayCay

Anne Winter

Date: 5/26/2025 1:43:00 AM

This is a delicious haiku! Loved it!

CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/28/2025 2:24:00 AM

I love 'delicious haiku' - it resembles my own kind of speak ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/25/2025 11:08:00 PM

This is a really good one, dearie.

CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/28/2025 2:23:00 AM

My beautiful friend, I wish we could eat non-haiku pie together some time ... CayCay

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/25/2025 8:56:00 PM

Count me in for 3.14159265 of a slice of that pie. OK? ~ Professor Pi

CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/28/2025 2:22:00 AM

I thought you were aware of the fact that I can't do advanced math. Since you've made it too difficult to sum your slice size, you'll have to sit in the corner ... CayCay

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/25/2025 7:29:00 PM

Mmmmmm...blueberries! Good and good for you. I like where this is going, CayCay. Best wishes for the contest. :)

CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/28/2025 2:28:00 AM

Thank you for contributing my blueberry pie craving, I mean for commenting ... CayCay

David Crandall

Date: 5/25/2025 4:07:00 PM

mmm, sounds good!

CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/28/2025 2:29:00 AM

With every reply to comments I pen, it sounds better and better. I want some, NOW ... CayCay

Jan Allison

Date: 5/25/2025 2:23:00 PM

ooh I have them on my cereal every day - just delicious like your poem!! hugs Jan xx

CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/28/2025 2:30:00 AM

It's so good to see you on my pages. I wish you had brought 2 bowls of blueberry topped cereal with you. I like them on Shredded Wheat. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/25/2025 12:59:00 PM

- Eat blueberries all year round ... a little vitamin bomb - Great written, CayCay ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/28/2025 2:18:00 AM

My eyes are visualizing a fresh plump blueberry right now while my mouth waters. Let's go get ourselves some ... CayCay

Tom Woody

Date: 5/25/2025 12:41:00 PM

Me too Cay. I love any kind of pie. We eat blueberries several times every week. Nice haiku

CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/25/2025 12:46:00 PM

Thank you, Tom. The downside is that all these Haikus really have created a desire for pie, either cherry or blueberry but there's no pie here and a storm outside. I like seeing your pic, the 70s collar and hair take me .... to many memories. Poetry hugs ... CayCay (I love picking blueberries, have done so in New England and Virginia.)

I Am Anaya

Date: 5/25/2025 12:21:00 PM

Blueberry magic, loved it! Happy Haikus are everywhere, liked yours best ~ xhugs

CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/25/2025 12:43:00 PM

That's what my muse said! Thanks for hanging around for 2 reads. I've had such fun with you lately. I need to see if you've got a fruity write posted, I want to see. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

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