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Fruity Haiku / Tania Kitchin

Blueberries

fresh picked blueberries
stimulate poetic pens ~
my muse just wants pie

cutedesirefruitfunnymusehaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

June 14, 2025 at 12:05 AM

This is super cute, Caycay. So creative.

Susan Ashley

June 5, 2025 at 9:47 AM

Dear CayCay, such a lively, aromatic, colorful, delicious haiku! "My muse just want pie" too! Your potent haiku stimulates the senses and imagination. Warmest wishes, my dear poet friend.. ~Susan

Regina Mcintosh

June 1, 2025 at 4:46 AM

Yum. God bless you. love, Gina

Kim Rodrigues

May 30, 2025 at 9:27 AM

I’ll take a slice! Fave!

Paige Hind

May 27, 2025 at 4:31 PM

LOL!!

CayCay Godwin

May 28, 2025 at 2:18 AM

I thought it was funny, too. Laughed when my muse shared it with me ... CayCay

Mystic Rose Rose

May 26, 2025 at 6:32 PM

Pie, blueberry ink, hmmm the list is endless gl in the contest dear heart :)

CayCay Godwin

May 28, 2025 at 2:27 AM

If I'd had as many slices of blueberry pie as I have blueberry comments my tummy would be yummy full then crummy ruled ... but I do crave one slice as a result of this contest. I'm gonna have to out and get me some ... CayCay

Anne Winter

May 26, 2025 at 1:43 AM

This is a delicious haiku! Loved it!

CayCay Godwin

May 28, 2025 at 2:24 AM

I love 'delicious haiku' - it resembles my own kind of speak ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

May 25, 2025 at 11:08 PM

This is a really good one, dearie.

CayCay Godwin

May 28, 2025 at 2:23 AM

My beautiful friend, I wish we could eat non-haiku pie together some time ... CayCay

Gershon Wolf

May 25, 2025 at 8:56 PM

Count me in for 3.14159265 of a slice of that pie. OK? ~ Professor Pi

CayCay Godwin

May 28, 2025 at 2:22 AM

I thought you were aware of the fact that I can't do advanced math. Since you've made it too difficult to sum your slice size, you'll have to sit in the corner ... CayCay

Evelyn Judy Buehler

May 25, 2025 at 7:29 PM

Mmmmmm...blueberries! Good and good for you. I like where this is going, CayCay. Best wishes for the contest. :)

CayCay Godwin

May 28, 2025 at 2:28 AM

Thank you for contributing my blueberry pie craving, I mean for commenting ... CayCay

David Crandall

May 25, 2025 at 4:07 PM

mmm, sounds good!

CayCay Godwin

May 28, 2025 at 2:29 AM

With every reply to comments I pen, it sounds better and better. I want some, NOW ... CayCay

Jan Allison

May 25, 2025 at 2:23 PM

ooh I have them on my cereal every day - just delicious like your poem!! hugs Jan xx

CayCay Godwin

May 28, 2025 at 2:30 AM

It's so good to see you on my pages. I wish you had brought 2 bowls of blueberry topped cereal with you. I like them on Shredded Wheat. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 25, 2025 at 12:59 PM

- Eat blueberries all year round ... a little vitamin bomb - Great written, CayCay ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

CayCay Godwin

May 28, 2025 at 2:18 AM

My eyes are visualizing a fresh plump blueberry right now while my mouth waters. Let's go get ourselves some ... CayCay

I Am Anaya

May 25, 2025 at 12:21 PM

Blueberry magic, loved it! Happy Haikus are everywhere, liked yours best ~ xhugs

CayCay Godwin

May 25, 2025 at 12:43 PM

That's what my muse said! Thanks for hanging around for 2 reads. I've had such fun with you lately. I need to see if you've got a fruity write posted, I want to see. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

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