blinds

blinds open
early morn special sunrise....
memory snaps shot

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 8/6/2025 9:41:00 PM

So nice to witness the glory of morning! Your poem evokes sunrise grandeur. Lovely writing, Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/7/2025 4:28:00 AM

Thank you, Evelyn. It has been so cloudy around here for the past week that it will seem like a miracle to see a sunrise once again. Sara K

Robert Pettit

Date: 7/31/2025 3:37:00 PM

Opening blinds is a great way to view the world after a short passage of time. You have written this senryu well.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/1/2025 1:41:00 AM

Why, thank you, Robert. I appreciate the visit and kind review of my work. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/31/2025 3:28:00 AM

I rarely see sunrise or sunset. I'm trying to write and read poets.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/31/2025 3:53:00 AM

Ahhh!!, Victor, step outside and view the scene for just a few seconds and see the change in your heartrate, blood pressure and feelings. Thanks for sharing your thoughts ..Sara K

Valsa George

Date: 7/30/2025 9:32:00 PM

I too do the same everyday, early in the morning to catch a glimpse of the rising sun. I can picture this. Well done dear Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/31/2025 3:51:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa. It is nice to see the horizon to see what colors or activity is going on. Thanks for the nice review. Sara K

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 7/30/2025 6:41:00 PM

Early morn is a special time when memories dawn on us. Beautiful, Sara!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/31/2025 3:50:00 AM

I like that line when memories dawn on us, Malabika. Thanks for the visit and kind review. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/30/2025 3:24:00 PM

Keep that memory close!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/31/2025 3:48:00 AM

Kim, sometimes a sunrise or sunset lingers for a long time. A picture I can keep helping me through whatever is going on. Thanks for the nice review. Sara K