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blinds open early morn special sunrise.... memory snaps shot

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Date: 7/31/2025 3:37:00 PM
Opening blinds is a great way to view the world after a short passage of time. You have written this senryu well.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/1/2025 1:41:00 AM
Why, thank you, Robert. I appreciate the visit and kind review of my work. Sara K
Date: 7/31/2025 3:28:00 AM
I rarely see sunrise or sunset. I'm trying to write and read poets.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/31/2025 3:53:00 AM
Ahhh!!, Victor, step outside and view the scene for just a few seconds and see the change in your heartrate, blood pressure and feelings. Thanks for sharing your thoughts ..Sara K
Date: 7/30/2025 9:32:00 PM
I too do the same everyday, early in the morning to catch a glimpse of the rising sun. I can picture this. Well done dear Sara.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/31/2025 3:51:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa. It is nice to see the horizon to see what colors or activity is going on. Thanks for the nice review. Sara K
Date: 7/30/2025 6:41:00 PM
Early morn is a special time when memories dawn on us. Beautiful, Sara!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/31/2025 3:50:00 AM
I like that line when memories dawn on us, Malabika. Thanks for the visit and kind review. Sara K
Date: 7/30/2025 3:24:00 PM
Keep that memory close!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/31/2025 3:48:00 AM
Kim, sometimes a sunrise or sunset lingers for a long time. A picture I can keep helping me through whatever is going on. Thanks for the nice review. Sara K
Date: 7/30/2025 6:22:00 AM
Hello Sara, nicely put. It’s a beautiful way to start the day. Loved the picture. Have a great day, my poet friend.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/30/2025 2:06:00 PM
Why, thank you, Zyrool. I appreciate the kind review. Sara K
Date: 7/29/2025 4:36:00 PM
you captured what I feel each morning when I open the blinds...memories begin. Nicely done, Sara K...enjoy your evening, Sara B
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/30/2025 6:18:00 AM
Glad you could relate personally, Sara B. Thanks for the wishes of enjoyment. I enjoyed sleeping last night. LOL..Sara K
Date: 7/29/2025 10:00:00 AM
The time to say "Good mourning Lord".
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/29/2025 2:23:00 PM
Yes, John. Mornings are special with God and the Holy Spirit. Thanks for the nice review of my work. Sara K

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