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blinds

blinds open
early morn special sunrise....
memory snaps shot

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Howard Kerr

September 1, 2026 at 2:51 AM

Extraordinarily clever, Sara. The definitive senyru. Each word germane to the plot.✨🔥 Fine descriptions Howard

Sara Kendrick

September 1, 2026 at 7:39 AM

Your visits always are eye opening. Thank you for your support by reading my work. 👍⭐. Sara K.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

August 6, 2025 at 9:41 PM

So nice to witness the glory of morning! Your poem evokes sunrise grandeur. Lovely writing, Sara.

Sara Kendrick

August 7, 2025 at 4:28 AM

Thank you, Evelyn. It has been so cloudy around here for the past week that it will seem like a miracle to see a sunrise once again. Sara K

Robert Pettit

July 31, 2025 at 3:37 PM

Opening blinds is a great way to view the world after a short passage of time. You have written this senryu well.

Sara Kendrick

August 1, 2025 at 1:41 AM

Why, thank you, Robert. I appreciate the visit and kind review of my work. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

July 31, 2025 at 3:28 AM

I rarely see sunrise or sunset. I'm trying to write and read poets.

Sara Kendrick

July 31, 2025 at 3:53 AM

Ahhh!!, Victor, step outside and view the scene for just a few seconds and see the change in your heartrate, blood pressure and feelings. Thanks for sharing your thoughts ..Sara K

Valsa George

July 30, 2025 at 9:32 PM

I too do the same everyday, early in the morning to catch a glimpse of the rising sun. I can picture this. Well done dear Sara.

Sara Kendrick

July 31, 2025 at 3:51 AM

Thank you, Valsa. It is nice to see the horizon to see what colors or activity is going on. Thanks for the nice review. Sara K

Malabika Ray Choudhury

July 30, 2025 at 6:41 PM

Early morn is a special time when memories dawn on us. Beautiful, Sara!

Sara Kendrick

July 31, 2025 at 3:50 AM

I like that line when memories dawn on us, Malabika. Thanks for the visit and kind review. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

July 30, 2025 at 3:24 PM

Keep that memory close!

Sara Kendrick

July 31, 2025 at 3:48 AM

Kim, sometimes a sunrise or sunset lingers for a long time. A picture I can keep helping me through whatever is going on. Thanks for the nice review. Sara K