BEACH

BEACH
water
sandy shore


picking up seashells
making big sand castles
playing in the blue water


"lasting beach dreams of childhood days"

beachchilddreamfunlovefree verse

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2025 9:03:00 AM

Looks like we both love the beach . Congrats

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/22/2025 9:11:00 AM

Thanks so much for reading, writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Beach" write. Yes, I love the beach. It was fun to bring to life these old childhood beach memories. No beach here and that makes me sad. Enjoy the day with blessings as you go writing away.............

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/21/2025 10:04:00 AM

"3 Place" Beach ~ Date Written:8/14/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet.....

Joseph May

Date: 8/20/2025 5:09:00 PM

Congrats on your win Paula, Very nicely penned

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/21/2025 10:04:00 AM

Thanks so much for reading, writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you found my "Beach" to be, Very nicely penned. No beach here and that makes me sad. I enjoyed writing about this fun beach for your wonderful contest. Thanks for having it and for my placement. The childhood memories will last forever. Enjoy the day with blessings as you go writing away.............

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 8/16/2025 3:21:00 PM

I like how you portrayed the beach. It sounded warm. (Cold beaches aren't much fun).

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/17/2025 12:30:00 PM

Thanks so much for reading and writing. Glad you enjoyed my "Beach" write. It was fun to bring to life these old childhood beach memories. No beach here and that makes me sad. Enjoy the day with blessings as you go writing away.............

Gary Radice

Date: 8/16/2025 12:22:00 AM

I note your poem has been entered into the "lasting beach dreams of childhood days" contest. I like how your poem is simply written in a minimalist, almost child like style. But it's by no means a childish poem. Far from it.. You've proven Paula that poets don't have to go overboard with words to convey striking imagery. Good luck in the contest. Cheers - Gary

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/16/2025 11:05:00 AM

Thanks so much for reading and writing. Also Thanks for your, Good luck in the contest. Glad you enjoyed my "Beach" write. It was written for the "Pyramids Poetry Contest." Yes, a writer can go overboard with words. Many times less can be more. It was fun to bring to life these old childhood beach memories. No beach here and that makes me sad. Cheers to you for a wonderful weekend... Enjoy the day with blessings as you go writing away.............

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/15/2025 12:05:00 PM

A lovely write, dear Paula! Who can resist the beach? This is a top contender!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/16/2025 10:55:00 AM

Thanks so much for reading and writing. Glad you found my "Beach" to be, A lovely write. No beach here and that makes me sad. I enjoyed writing about the fun beach. The childhood memories will last forever. Enjoy the day with blessings as you go writing away.............

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/15/2025 2:45:00 AM

Beautiful contest entry, dear Paula. Those early years frolics by the shore shall linger bright within each heart's embrace.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/16/2025 10:52:00 AM

Thanks so much for reading and writing. Glad you found my "Beach" write to be a, Beautiful contest entry. I enjoyed writing about the fun beach. The childhood memories will last forever. I miss the beach, none here. Enjoy the day with blessings as you go writing away.............

Valsa George

Date: 8/14/2025 9:56:00 PM

Lovely entry dear Paula. These childhood activities on the beach will be so green in every one's memories. I used to enjoy the silvery foam being thrown on to sand with every arriving wave..

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/16/2025 10:51:00 AM

Thanks so much for reading and writing. Glad you found my "Beach" write to be a, Lovely entry. I enjoyed writing about the fun beach. The childhood memories will last forever. Enjoy the day with blessings as you go writing away.............

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/14/2025 11:52:00 AM

Beach ~ Date Written:8/14/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet.....