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This poem was written for and submitted to "Seasonal Crystalline Poem" poetry contest, Tania Kitchin, sponsor, September 1, 2025

AUTUMNAL BLISS--Seasonal Crystalline Poem

AUTUMNAL BLISS
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autumn's winds, a playful caress
dissonant wind chimes dance in artful bliss

12th gradeautumnwindcrystalline

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/2/2025 7:06:00 AM

- Beautiful play in the autumn wind, Sara :) - Best wishes for the contest :) - hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/2/2025 4:45:00 PM

thanks, Anne-Lise, for your kind and encouraging comments, hugs for this evening, Sara

Valsa George

Date: 9/1/2025 8:35:00 PM

I can see the wind chimes dancing in bliss. Lovely Crystalline dear Sara.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/2/2025 4:45:00 PM

awww, thanks, Valsa! :-) hugs, Sara

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/1/2025 7:41:00 PM

I'm not sure "joyful bliss" works ~ you might want to consider a different 2-syllable adjective: ex. 'divine', but 'artful' rhymes with 'playful' so that would get my vote.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/2/2025 4:45:00 PM

thanks for the advice, Line. Makes sense. appreciate your input

AUTUMNAL BLISS--Seasonal Crystalline Poem

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