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Written - 25th September 2024

 

autumn perfection- NFC

on autumnal days
leaves dance alike confetti 
upon whirling breeze.

cosy evenings in
growing darker day by day
family bonding.

nights glow in moonlight
stunning stature perfection 
of silhouette trees.

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Karen Jones Date: 10/29/2024 4:20:00 PM This is lovely with great imagery! Login to Reply

Suzette Richards Date: 10/12/2024 9:48:00 PM Some great lines here, Bellie. The imagery is well executed. Su x Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 10/12/2024 10:10:00 PM Thank you Suzette, you made me laugh as I’m often called Bellie :) x

Sara Kendrick Date: 9/30/2024 3:29:00 AM Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Autumn is well expressed in this work. Sara K Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 9/30/2024 6:23:00 AM Thank you Sara, I was too late to enter the contest… Beryl

Victor Buhagiar Date: 9/30/2024 2:06:00 AM Perfect haikus. Best for a win. Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 9/30/2024 2:13:00 AM Thank you so much Victor, your words mean a lot, too late for the contest … Beryl

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 9/28/2024 8:39:00 PM A gorgeous set of haikus, Beryl! Very much enjoyed! :) Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 9/29/2024 12:45:00 AM Thank you very much Evelyn, I’m pleased you enjoyed these Haiku’s… Beryl

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 9/28/2024 11:37:00 AM I love tree in every season but your autumn falling leaves which 'dance alike confetti upon whirling breeze' is so vividly depicted your cozy evenings i growing darker days is so beautiful. Terrific Haiku. Hugs, Jennifer. Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 9/28/2024 6:07:00 PM Thank you so much Jennifer, I love trees in any season too, they never cease to amaze me with their uniqueness and beauty… Hugs in return, Beryl

Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/26/2024 1:01:00 PM Very nice, Beryl! … Stunning stature perfection Of silhouette trees Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 9/26/2024 2:07:00 PM Thank you Kim, I really love trees, the sjapes the colours and the variety of leaves… Beryl

Paula Goldsmith Date: 9/26/2024 12:12:00 PM I enjoyed reading your 3 Haiku writes. Great Picture... I love this time of the year. Enjoy It.... Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away......................... Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 9/26/2024 2:05:00 PM Thank you Paula, I truly enjoy this time of year, especially the changing colour of trees. Have a lovely blessed poetic day too… Beryl

John Read Date: 9/26/2024 8:55:00 AM That was perfection sister Beryl. Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 9/26/2024 10:19:00 AM Thank you brother John… Sis Beryl

Tom Woody Date: 9/25/2024 3:55:00 PM Pretty pic and haikus Beryl Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 9/26/2024 12:31:00 AM Thank you Tom… Beryl