autumn

time for warmer clothes 
for frost could pay a visit 
autumn days are here 

colder days approaching 
trees slowly shedding their leaves 
hibernating creatures 

autumn's demise 
welcomes winter's arrival 
bids summer goodbye
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/5/2024 7:59:00 PM
Congrats on POTW! Still warmish here.
Login to Reply
Read Avatar
John Read
Date: 10/6/2024 1:43:00 AM
Thank you Kim the weather's not that cold here in London.
Date: 10/1/2024 5:52:00 AM
John, beautiful haikus and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE WEEK honor, well done, Constance
Login to Reply
Read Avatar
John Read
Date: 10/1/2024 10:35:00 AM
Thank you Constance I now feel like a poet. Lol xx
Date: 9/29/2024 4:14:00 PM
' trees slowly shedding their leaves. ' Before this happens, they change into many vibrant colors. So beautiful, indeed. Autumn has arrived, which means cooler temps and warm blankets. Congratulations John, on Poem of the Week. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Login to Reply
Read Avatar
John Read
Date: 9/30/2024 10:46:00 AM
Thank you Brandy keep warm sweetheart. X
Date: 9/29/2024 9:44:00 AM
Congrats on your POTW. Nicely written. Thanks for sharing.
Login to Reply
Read Avatar
John Read
Date: 9/29/2024 9:48:00 AM
Thank you Benjamin for your visit and comment.
Date: 9/29/2024 8:11:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your POTW win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "autumn" Haiku writes again. Have a blessed day writing away with your win..................
Login to Reply
Read Avatar
John Read
Date: 9/29/2024 8:36:00 AM
Thank you Paula, it was a unexpected surprise have a lovely day.
Date: 9/29/2024 6:20:00 AM
Congrats on your potw!
Login to Reply
Read Avatar
John Read
Date: 9/29/2024 6:31:00 AM
Thank you Karen it was a surprise.
Date: 9/29/2024 5:03:00 AM
Hi John, congratulations on your POTW and your magnificent Haiku garland, depicting the exit of Autumn. Here in Australia our seasons as you know are upside down - Literally, and we are in Spring (one of your favourite seasons) and heading towards Summer. Hope the rain goes away in London. Maria
Login to Reply
Read Avatar
John Read
Date: 9/29/2024 5:16:00 AM
Thank you Maria, I not to clever writing Haikus so it's come as a big surprise.
Date: 9/29/2024 4:17:00 AM
Hello John, Congratulations and what a a great honor to be POTW and so well deserved for wonderful Haikus about the best season of the year. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Login to Reply
Read Avatar
John Read
Date: 9/29/2024 5:18:00 AM
Thank you Daniel, it did surprise me being picked for POTW.
Date: 9/29/2024 2:02:00 AM
Brother John, how wonderful to see you receiving the honour of poem of the week, congratulations… Sis Beryl
Login to Reply
Read Avatar
John Read
Date: 9/29/2024 11:37:00 AM
Thank you sister Beryl, I was surprised as I find Haikus hard to do.
Date: 9/29/2024 1:31:00 AM
You captured autumn well John, my favourite season without a doubt. Congratulations to you on the honour of POTW. Tom
Login to Reply
Read Avatar
John Read
Date: 9/29/2024 11:44:00 AM
Thank you Tom, I was surprised at being chosen for POTW, maybe one day I'll be a poet lol.
Date: 9/28/2024 6:04:00 AM
Beautiful haiku, my favorite season!
Login to Reply
Read Avatar
John Read
Date: 9/28/2024 6:19:00 AM
Thank you Karen Autumn and spring are my favourite seasons. God bless you.
Date: 9/27/2024 10:02:00 AM
And it can never come too soon for me. My favorite season. Great piece, John.
Login to Reply
Read Avatar
John Read
Date: 9/27/2024 11:09:00 AM
Thank you Jim, it's been raining all day in London, how's it been where you are.
Date: 9/24/2024 1:41:00 PM
Such poise autumn haikus .. i especially enjoyed the 3rd one :p
Login to Reply
Read Avatar
John Read
Date: 9/25/2024 4:42:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and comment Peonieslore.
Date: 9/24/2024 12:56:00 PM
I like your little set too, John.
Login to Reply
Read Avatar
John Read
Date: 9/24/2024 1:13:00 PM
Thank you Andrea I do find Haikus a struggle. Enjoy your day God bless you.
Date: 9/24/2024 12:19:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "autumn" Haiku writes. I am glad the hot summer is almost over. "Good Luck" Have a beautiful day writing away...............
Login to Reply
Read Avatar
John Read
Date: 9/24/2024 1:12:00 PM
Thank you Paula for your time and comment God bless you.
Date: 9/24/2024 12:04:00 PM
John, love your haikus, Constance
Login to Reply
Read Avatar
John Read
Date: 9/24/2024 1:10:00 PM
Thank you Constance I'm still learning to write Haikus one day I'll get there lol.
Date: 9/23/2024 7:38:00 PM
A wonderful trio of Haiku brother John. At autumn’s demise winter resides… Sis Beryl
Login to Reply
Read Avatar
John Read
Date: 9/24/2024 1:47:00 AM
Hi sister Beryl, I'm not to clever regarding Haikus,just wrote it for the poetry contest,although I never do any good in them lol.
Date: 9/23/2024 6:25:00 PM
I am still yearning for time at the pool. I had to get out a cardigan this morning and I cried a little bit. Autumn's demise, is a great description of what winter is. Good job.
Login to Reply
Read Avatar
John Read
Date: 9/24/2024 1:50:00 AM
It's cold in London today time to sort out my winter clothes,thank you for your visit and comment Miranda.
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter