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Signature of you, slides upon lips

of me . . thirsty, anticipating again

skin to skin, fingertips . .

tracing soft syllables,

at dawn

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of me,

a satisfying symphony

an echo . . serenading low

as sentences stay and grow

upon lips, sliding along . . at dawn

At Dawn

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~ Playful and Poetic ~ 

* Whisper of Words *

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Jared Pickett

Date: 1/15/2023 3:18:00 AM

Trying to figure out if this is a metaphor for the symphony of words, poetry being mentally erotic or if this is meant to be erotic. Either way, exquisite writing. I'm rather enjoying this journey through your mind. Much love!!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/16/2023 12:35:00 PM

It's a combination of both. Words are playful, sensual and erotic, and so are moments of passion. Thank you Jared, for your lovely comment. Writing about such moments are easy for me. Very exciting and inviting indeed. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/4/2022 2:49:00 PM

Passionate work you have penned in this one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/4/2022 6:25:00 PM

Thank you, Sara. Yes, a little touch of passion lingers within, soft sensuality as well. You and your kind words are appreciated. You're very welcome. My best to you. :) Brandy

Michael Ellis

Date: 3/26/2021 1:07:00 PM

Who can resist a poem filled with the letter S? Simply seductive and softly silent. Great work. I am glad this is the first poem of yours I decided to read. It was a beautiful stop in the road of my day. I counted 12 S words....This poem is song and it dances....Bravo

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/26/2021 9:45:00 PM

I like the way you think, Michael. The letter "S" is Sensational. :) Thank you for stopping by and reading this little scribble of mine. Your thoughts bring a smile. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2021 3:58:00 PM

One of the best I have read today, Brandy!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/20/2021 6:48:00 PM

Awe, thank you Andrea. Such a sweet thing to say. I appreciate you and your kind words. :) Brandy

Ann Peck

Date: 3/20/2021 12:44:00 PM

Beautifully written Beautifully written! Brings forth memories in this old soul.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/20/2021 6:47:00 PM

Thank you, Ann. I am happy that I could bring back some wonderful memories for you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Running Wolves

Date: 3/9/2021 8:19:00 AM

exquisite poetry

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/9/2021 8:05:00 PM

Thank you, Robert. I appreciate you and your thoughts. :) Brandy

Eve Roper

Date: 2/28/2021 8:15:00 PM

Wow, a very sensual verse, Brandy, far from being a simple scribble. Beautiful. Thank you for your visit on my poem, “ Harbinger Birds of Spring” and leaving a wonderful compliment and congratulation. Hugs Eve

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/28/2021 8:30:00 PM

Thank you so much, Eve. So sweet of you to say- that this is more than a simple scribble. (Well, it is, but I won't argue with you) You are very welcome. I enjoyed reading your poem about Spring. Such beautiful images you paint. My best to you. :) Brandy

Robert Lindley

Date: 2/28/2021 1:33:00 PM

Wow! Love the picture and the very fine poem too! * In beauty of the breath of glowing dawn. *The paradise dwelt in the night before.* Nature, its glory- mother doe and fawn.*Love's desire reside upon golden shores..... Your poetic depths resound in --"the whispers of words." A true gem and a fine fav..

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/28/2021 8:26:00 PM

Didn't mean to make your heart flutter, with the photo. :) Sometimes, a soft sensual reminder is a good thing.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/28/2021 8:24:00 PM

Oh my ! Your thoughts are so beautiful and poetic. Such a wonderful comment and compliment, my dear friend. I am smiling and blushing, all at the same time. So kind of you to place this is your favorites. Thank you. :) Brandy

Robert Lindley
Date: 2/28/2021 1:35:00 PM

Careful with pictures like that- some of us have ailing hearts... As such may bring back our own treasured nights and passionate memories of youth and such glorious sensuality.....

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 2/27/2021 6:00:00 PM

Beautiful words in this lovey Shape form verse... Belle

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/27/2021 7:18:00 PM

Thank you, Belle. So kind of you to read this little scribble of mine. My best to you. :) Brandy

Joseph May

Date: 2/25/2021 5:39:00 PM

I enjoyed your sensual poem Brandy, Wonderful write

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/25/2021 7:38:00 PM

Soft and sensual moments caress. Thank you, Joseph. :) Brandy

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/25/2021 9:07:00 AM

I like the playfulness of those 'fingertips tracing soft syllables...sliding along at dawn.' Sweet! Smiles, Gershon

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/25/2021 7:29:00 PM

"Fingertips... " create a playful melody indeed. Thank you, Gershon. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy

Constance La France

Date: 2/22/2021 3:55:00 PM

Brandy, beautiful writing and I love your and layout, well done _Constance

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/22/2021 7:28:00 PM

Constance, thank you for reading this little scribble of mine. All of your kind words and compliments are greatly appreciated. I enjoy writing using this form. :) Brandy

David Kavanagh

Date: 2/21/2021 12:47:00 AM

Heya Brandy, you certainly know how to present your poems, pictures shapes words colors, even just black and white, all complimenting your sensual playful pillow moments, was great to get a little time out from the drudge, cheers David

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/21/2021 8:13:00 PM

Hey, David. Such a wonderful compliment about the way my poetry caresses the page. This scribble of mine is playful, poetic and sensual, all at the same time. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 2/20/2021 10:03:00 PM

What a beautiful moment at dawn as the poetry of love forms upon her lips. So soft and sensual, Brandy, another beautiful scribble. Hugs, john

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/21/2021 8:07:00 PM

Love is such a wonderful emotion. Thank you, John. There are sensual moments around these words of mine. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Hugs, Brandy

Rico Leffanta

Date: 2/20/2021 10:49:00 AM

She mostly certainly would be enjoyed in my bed at dawn! Thank you for the treat! Aloha! Rico

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/20/2021 6:06:00 PM

Oh my ! Such a playful comment. :) Your thoughts make me blush. Thank you, Rico. I enjoyed creating this sensual, yet poetic scribble. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/20/2021 5:17:00 AM

How tender and sensual! Beautifully done my friend in romantic syllables and serenading echoes. Another signature write--enjoyed the playful tone, Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/20/2021 6:01:00 PM

Thank you, Vijay. Verbs and syllables are so magical- simply playful and inviting. Your thoughts are appreciated. "Another Signature Write" Such a wonderful compliment. :) Brandy

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