Alice Through The Wormhole

"I'm bored," said Alice to nobody in particular. Lying in her bedroom, gazing wistfully at the stars, she often wondered what life might be like on another planet. School was boring, she didn't have any friends to speak of, and it had been nearly four years since her trip to Wonderland. "Not even a teenager yet and already my life is rather sucky," she mused to herself. Before long she drifted off to sleep and began to dream...

"Oh Alice," squeaked Mr. Hightopp (aka as the Hatter), "I have a riddle for you." "Yes, please tell me dear sir," replied Alice. "Alrighty then. What does a raven have in common with a wormhole?" "Well I, I don't know," said Alice. "Just what does a raven have in common with a wormhole?" "Heck if I know. But come on, let's have some fun, shall we?" said the Hatter, gleefully.  

With that he took her by the hand and they began to fly toward the heavens, yet neither of them had wings! Up, up, up, higher and higher until earth was only a tiny blue and white haze behind them. They flew past Mars. Then past Jupiter and Saturn, Uranus and Neptune. At the outer rim of the Milky Way galaxy the Hatter paused and asked, "Alice my dear, do you understand what lies beyond this point?" "Dear sir, how could I ever hope to know such a thing," she replied.

Suddenly, the cosmos began to spin and they felt a pull, a tug of exceptional force, drawing them toward... something. It was an anomaly of sorts, big, black and ominous. Spinning, spinning; in a flash they were sucked inside the phenomenon, stars blinking, time nearly standing still. The Hatter tried to speak but his mouth moved in slow motion and the words made no sound. Alice had never been so frightened in all her life, not even during her trips to Wonderland. Just as she was contemplating it all the spinning stopped and they found themselves lying on the ground. Above them the sky was green and below the grass was sky blue.

Alice spoke first, "Oh Mad Hatter, what is this place, and just what are we to expect from this unusual journey?" "Goodness, I'm not sure at all, not sure at all little one," replied the Hatter. Just then, a lavender-colored raven flew overhead and cawed out, "Haha, you silly ones. Do you really not know where you are? Why, this is Earth II, the exact opposite of your planet. Soon you'll find yourselves breathing the water and swimming in the air. You'll bite the mosquitoes and sting the bees, all in good fun, of course. There will be cake and ice cream for dinner and vegetables for dessert. And Alice, dear Alice, no one here ever gets bored. Caw Caw."

Alice looked at the Hatter and he stared back, both bewildered as they could possibly be. Neither knew what to make of it, but it sure seemed exciting! Just as they were getting ready to explore, a voice from across the cosmos called out, "Alice, Alice, wake up. Time for school." 

Alice woke up smiling, for she now understood she would never, ever be bored again. All she had to do was

dream 


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Date: 9/6/2025 10:45:00 AM
A great write Tom, Imagery was excellent Enjoyed the story Kevin
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/6/2025 11:58:00 AM
Thx Mr Kevin sir
Date: 8/16/2025 6:11:00 AM
If only life could be so fun. We'll chase the wolves away too and beat the heck out of giants with Jack. Grafitti the witch's house with the two siblings & team up with a certain beauty against her two evil step sisters. A certain Rose would be an insomniac and have a team of dwarves to protect her. Love the read, Tom!!!!
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/23/2025 8:10:00 AM
Sounds like more fun Ryan!
Date: 8/12/2025 1:30:00 PM
Tom, I love your Wonderland tale! You should write a book! I write pretend tales and sometimes wish I could live there! Congratulations!
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/12/2025 1:35:00 PM
I'm glad you found my sample poem worthy
Date: 8/4/2025 2:32:00 PM
We cannot imagine or perceive a world of no dreams! A life sustaining reality! We dream to survive.. We live to dream.. Dream is our light in a dark world.. A sanctuary.. a drop of Love.. a breath of Hope.. Dream, is that fairy world that we believe in and we allow ourselves to nourish from and drink of its brooks.. keeping it hidden inside us.. What a wonderful tale of meanings! A narrative that lends itself to many readings.. God bless you and your quill, Tom! Always a true delight to read your creative writings unfolding your thoughts, feelings and visions.. My deepest regards and blessings.
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/4/2025 3:28:00 PM
Good to see you here Besma. You're a hidden treasure
Date: 8/4/2025 2:04:00 PM
I loved this story because Dad would read Alice in Wonderland to me as a bedtime story. He would mimic the White Rabbit being late and it was hilarious. I like your twist and how she has now become Alice in Underland LOL. SuZ
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/4/2025 2:06:00 PM
Very cool thx Suze
Date: 8/1/2025 6:41:00 PM
An amusing write, Tom. I enjoy everything wonderland, this no exception. Missed the Cheshire cat. Perhaps the voice of reason? Or maybe not, he was like a floating bodiless specter. Alice and the Mr hightop, were better off without his meddling self. Poem worth a dozen eggs!
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Michelle Mac Donald
Date: 8/5/2025 6:17:00 AM
Well, you've made me laugh, Tom! Sheesh, I got carried away with that confounded poultry, sorry
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/4/2025 2:07:00 PM
Just for that I demand 3 dozen
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Michelle Mac Donald
Date: 8/1/2025 6:51:00 PM
Nope, you're too greedy
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/1/2025 6:44:00 PM
Ha! You knew I needed them. Uh, can I get two dozen while we're at it? Thx Michelle
Date: 7/31/2025 12:26:00 AM
TOM, hi, strange but i have a similar yet different Alice poem, our minds do wander into fantasia sometimes mixed with human abilities - LOVE IT my poem is called, YES, I MET ALICE. Hope you and your family are keeping well. We are moving in 2 weeks time and will have a 2 year and 8 month old grand-daughter who is as sharp as a penny popping in often who talks, sings and is starting to read - she goes to school, hope she comes over all the time, our cottage is literally right next to the main house - WE love her to bits and pieces. YOUR POEM IS MY CUP OF TEA ENJOYED THOROUGHLY Tom. Blessings and hugs Jennifer.
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/31/2025 4:15:00 AM
Much thx Jen and let me see if I have any Earl Grey around here :)
Date: 7/30/2025 6:03:00 PM
Tom, your story is fascinating, and such fun to read! I love the original story, and I love this! It's a fave for me. :)
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/30/2025 7:07:00 PM
Coming from a fellow storyteller means a lot Ev
Date: 7/29/2025 8:38:00 PM
Another fantastic poem by the Woody! Extremely well written and full of imagery that will keep me going through this week. Thanks for sharing!
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/30/2025 4:29:00 AM
Yessir and thx much
Date: 7/28/2025 9:50:00 PM
Very cool... such a vivid imagination! The earth will change and be perfect once again... put back on it's axis, where as now it is off by degrees causing all kinds of devastation. The firmament will be in place again...I think some believe this will cause the sea to be overhead? I'm just excited to see the new Jerusalem after the 1000 years!
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/29/2025 4:10:00 AM
So much appreciate your support Crystol
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/28/2025 9:50:00 PM
Researching the gem stones/precious stones that make up the temple is an awesome study! God doesn't include ones we would assume would be there like rubies because of how it does, does not, reflect the lightAnyway... lol sorry I went off on a tangent! L love reading your stories and understanding your meaning and reading between lines! Xo
Date: 7/28/2025 5:57:00 AM
What a fun and imaginative read! Loved the wild twist with Earth II—cake for dinner and vegetables for dessert? Sign me up! The Hatter was spot on, too. This definitely captures the wonder of dreaming!
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/28/2025 5:59:00 AM
Chocolate cake with cherries at that! Thx much Rowena
Date: 7/27/2025 9:32:00 PM
Aw, so cute! I loved reading Alice in Wonderland to my children when they were little, we had so much fun with it! This is a wonderful little tale, I wish you could keep right on writing more about it :)
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/28/2025 5:34:00 AM
It would be fun to see where it would take my pen. Thx Bj
Date: 7/27/2025 11:13:00 AM
Very cute story! I must paint that one day. upside down pines, green skies and blue grass! But perhaps Seuss has already!
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/27/2025 5:35:00 PM
Hey thx
Date: 7/27/2025 10:11:00 AM
Your in a class all of your own when you tell as story, Tom. Great example, I hope I can follow lol
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/27/2025 5:35:00 PM
Very sweet thx
Date: 7/27/2025 9:20:00 AM
Dear Tom, I was fully engaged with your narrative from the very start. Such animated and captivating story-telling! Your poem is thrilling and your last four lines are a resonant and satisfying finale. My imagination and soul are both smiling! Warmest wishes, my poet friend.. ~Suze
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/27/2025 5:36:00 PM
I'm glad thx so much
Date: 7/26/2025 11:30:00 AM
I really loved reading this, Tom. Your prose is highly innovative, and it served as an excellent contest sample.
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/26/2025 12:22:00 PM
Hey much thx
Date: 7/26/2025 10:06:00 AM
What a captivating, gripping read, Tom. You remind me of another great PS storyteller, Tom Cunningham. I'm faving this...
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/26/2025 10:13:00 AM
Thx much. Interestingly I've been considering a version of Soup Creek
Date: 7/25/2025 5:16:00 AM
Loved your story. Turning every topsy turvy with elegance. Dream on my friend.
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/25/2025 5:22:00 AM
I don't think we've seen the last of Alice in space. Thx Vic
Date: 7/25/2025 2:17:00 AM
l love to reading narrative writing, and this was very enjoyable Tom. You have very creative writing skills, hope to read more of your work soon. Jackie
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/25/2025 5:03:00 AM
Thx so much
Date: 7/24/2025 5:45:00 AM
Wow, you're a great storyteller, Tommy. 'There will be cake and ice cream for dinner and vegetables for dessert' Tell me now, which kid wouldn't want that choice? I hope one day you will seriously consider publishing a kids' book, or two. Winky is a great story too. A fave for me...Hugs
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/24/2025 5:47:00 AM
You've always been a supporter of my stories and a generous collaborator as well. There are many of us who appreciate you Maria.
Date: 7/23/2025 3:55:00 PM
BRAVO! You can write, yes, indeedy. Reading, I became a child again, hanging on to each word. My wonderment pulsed a need to know what happens next & I felt sure I was in pjs. I am impressed with your skill to write dramatic, entertaining fantasy with grammatically correct lines. From word 1, you employed the tools of a seasoned storyteller. I'm grateful I landed here, in Alice's thrilling wormhole. Must I go? Say, yes, so I may stay. You won your own contest. It is opposite world. CayCay
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/23/2025 4:05:00 PM
Maybe one day I'll expand on this little bugger. For now you have my sincere gratitude
Date: 7/23/2025 1:27:00 PM
A great ending. That's why I love my own dreams so much. They can be weird as heck but I love them because it's like a movie and I hate waking up from them.
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/23/2025 1:29:00 PM
Mine are usually nightmares. I need to drink more lol
Date: 7/23/2025 7:44:00 AM
Hello Tom, welllllll.... you took me on the wildest cosmic ride and I swear (not literally) I could almost feel the spin of that wormhole. Tom, you’ve got this incredible knack for blending whimsy with wonder, turning boredom into an invitation to dream bigger than the whole Milky Way. A wild, joyful spark in the mundane, and I’m grateful for the invitation to dream alongside Alice. Summer Blessings, Tom, Daniel
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/23/2025 8:23:00 AM
So happy you found it entertaining Daniel
Date: 7/23/2025 6:29:00 AM
Dreams can work mixed with wild ideas and goals set, then one might get a wild reality. I hope people dream good dreams, have wild hopes and set wonderful goals. Sara K..Enjoyed reading.
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/23/2025 8:24:00 AM
Thx so much Sara. I suspect Alice's dreams are going to surpass even Wonderland
Date: 7/22/2025 7:48:00 PM
A great story Tom, enjoyed the read… Beryl
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/23/2025 5:29:00 AM
Muchos gracias
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