aged

century old home
weathered paint, aged roof
love holds together

agehomelovesenryu

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/6/2025 1:13:00 PM

Your "aged" is a lovely write with a pretty picture. This is so true... Have a lovely day/weekend writing away.................

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/7/2025 3:06:00 AM

Thank you, Paula. I appreciate the visit. I was thinking how an older home like this seems alive and well until no one no longer lives there. Your visits add a special touch. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/2/2025 9:21:00 AM

It certainly does!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/2/2025 12:01:00 PM

Yes, Kim, most of the time love did live in the older homes that inhabited the countryside. Thanks for the visit and uplifting review. Sara K

Deb M

Date: 9/2/2025 6:20:00 AM

Absolutely love the simplicity and pure beautifulness of your poem Sara and the picture is just gorgeous! Debx

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/2/2025 12:00:00 PM

Deb, your visit has added a special touch to my page. Thanks for the time spent here. Sara k

Lin Lane

Date: 9/2/2025 6:10:00 AM

I would love to live in such a lovely old home. The swing makes the setting even more welcoming. A very well written Senryu, Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/2/2025 11:59:00 AM

Why, thank you, Lin. I appreciate the visit and nice review. Yes, those older homes are lovely and quite livable except harder to heat in the winter unless there is a lot of insulation. I appreciate the visit and nice review of my work. Sara K