aged

century old home
weathered paint, aged roof
love holds together

agehomelovesenryu

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Paula Goldsmith

September 6, 2025 at 1:13 PM

Your "aged" is a lovely write with a pretty picture. This is so true... Have a lovely day/weekend writing away.................

Sara Kendrick

September 7, 2025 at 3:06 AM

Thank you, Paula. I appreciate the visit. I was thinking how an older home like this seems alive and well until no one no longer lives there. Your visits add a special touch. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

September 2, 2025 at 9:21 AM

It certainly does!

Sara Kendrick

September 2, 2025 at 12:01 PM

Yes, Kim, most of the time love did live in the older homes that inhabited the countryside. Thanks for the visit and uplifting review. Sara K

Deb M

September 2, 2025 at 6:20 AM

Absolutely love the simplicity and pure beautifulness of your poem Sara and the picture is just gorgeous! Debx

Sara Kendrick

September 2, 2025 at 12:00 PM

Deb, your visit has added a special touch to my page. Thanks for the time spent here. Sara k

Lin Lane

September 2, 2025 at 6:10 AM

I would love to live in such a lovely old home. The swing makes the setting even more welcoming. A very well written Senryu, Sara.

Sara Kendrick

September 2, 2025 at 11:59 AM

Why, thank you, Lin. I appreciate the visit and nice review. Yes, those older homes are lovely and quite livable except harder to heat in the winter unless there is a lot of insulation. I appreciate the visit and nice review of my work. Sara K