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7/18/2025 for WHAT HAPPENED AFTER Poetry Contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud

Gazing at the cloudy sky, I could only sit and sigh. It was all that I had feared. The beautiful, airy face that appeared with quiet grace, then without a word or trace, so silently disappeared.

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Date: 7/23/2025 9:01:00 AM
Love and loss so poignantly described...congratulations xo
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Date: 7/18/2025 4:38:00 PM
I was left a little sad with 'so silently disappeared.' nicely done
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David Crandall
Date: 7/19/2025 4:54:00 PM
Thanks Sara!

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