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A Nature Adventure

The love song echoed 
Among the picturesque hills. 
They laughed despite their shrill voices.
Trees tremble as leaves fall.
Golden Autumn was approaching. 
Still, all is fresh and alive.

Above, clouds rushed among the dark purple trees.
The whispering leaves, the humming breeze, 
As large geese flew towards the south.
Yet robins would not be left behind.
Whilst Dunnocks used their song 
As they asserted their dominance with their mates.

Yet suddenly, the sky darkens, threatening,
The two lovers ran toward their sleek car.
A timeless dance of pitter-patter
The rhythm of light raindrops gave them warmth, 
They had prepared a delicious assortment of eatables.
Then switching up their radio, 
Left the vale and drove into the broad thoroughfare
Towards their cosy and spacious house in the town.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 3/22/2025 9:59:00 PM
Victor, I loved the switch from the beautiful, but unpredictable outdoors, to the cozy, warm comfort of home in the town. A wonderful poem!
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Date: 3/22/2025 12:45:00 PM
Nice imagery- I could feel it, like the rain - I want it to rain now lol
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Date: 3/21/2025 5:17:00 AM
Dear Victor, I feel I am standing in a scene of autumn's dual nature with the fading of summer's warmth alongside the burst of fall colors. I loved the contrast between the wild, natural world and the comfort of human connection is particularly poignant. I miss autumn's magic and the warmth of companionship. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 3/20/2025 5:51:00 PM
A slice of treasured life, thrill, up and downs of it all. Well said, Victor. There was a time when I liked nothing better than such country, or park excursions. Fond memories your lovely write awakens.
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Date: 3/20/2025 12:20:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "A Nature Adventure" write. Pretty Picture... Have a fun/blessed day as you write away...........
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Date: 3/20/2025 11:56:00 AM
- Beautiful experiences on a great autumn day, Victor :) - hugs
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Date: 3/20/2025 11:48:00 AM
I've had many lovely days like this with my girl. I know you have great memories Vic. Beautiful poem
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Date: 3/20/2025 11:45:00 AM
Love that late time of year when autumn is approaching. Sounds like a lovely day out Victor. Tom
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Date: 3/20/2025 11:18:00 AM
Hi Victor I enjoyed reading your wonderful adventure, have a lovely evening.
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