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A Nature Adventure

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The love song echoed Among the picturesque hills. They laughed despite their shrill voices. Trees tremble as leaves fall. Golden Autumn was approaching. Still, all is fresh and alive. Above, clouds rushed among the dark purple trees. The whispering leaves, the humming breeze, As large geese flew towards the south. Yet robins would not be left behind. Whilst Dunnocks used their song As they asserted their dominance with their mates. Yet suddenly, the sky darkens, threatening, The two lovers ran toward their sleek car. A timeless dance of pitter-patter The rhythm of light raindrops gave them warmth, They had prepared a delicious assortment of eatables. Then switching up their radio, Left the vale and drove into the broad thoroughfare Towards their cosy and spacious house in the town.

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