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1410 Rhyme Time - New Untitled  9-5-25
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Thin layers of amber curl around hillsides
Tendrils of dawn on a sunrise joy ride.

joymorningcouplet

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/19/2025 1:56:00 AM

Wowie this is marvelous. A very well deserved trophy win

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/15/2025 11:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your trophy winner. Way to go. I enjoyed reading this creative work. I am delighted that it was on top of the winners' list. Sara K

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/17/2025 11:52:00 AM

Hi Sara! What a wonderful surprise the trophy was in Brian's contest! Thank you for sharing in my joy! Sending you blessings on amber veils each dawn!

Jeanette Swan

Date: 9/15/2025 5:04:00 AM

Nice. Tendrils of dawn...dreamy, then energised by the joyride. J :)

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/17/2025 11:49:00 AM

Hi Jeanette! Thank you for stopping by to enjoy this morning glory and write such a lovely note! We always think of a beautiful night as being dreamy but I like your description of a dreamy morning! Sending you blessings for each morning!

Paige Hind

Date: 9/11/2025 5:56:00 PM

Cool, and congrats!!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/17/2025 11:47:00 AM

Thank you, Paige! Who can resist the beauty of dawn creeping into morning? Even though I am a night person I am always mesmerized by the magic of dawn. Blessings and hugs!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/11/2025 11:49:00 AM

What a joyride that must have been, with the tendrils of dawn just becoming visible. What perfect words to express sunrise . Absolutely love your couplet dear friend Congratulation on your win. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/17/2025 11:41:00 AM

Dearest Jennifer! Your lovely note of congratulations brought me joy like watching Aurora creep into the sky spreading her veils of amber, mauve and golden light. Thank you, dear friend! One of the wonderful gifts of sunrise is that no matter where we are in this world, no matter what the season, we can be blessed by dawn's beauty! Sending you bliss and blessings of dawn, dear friend! Hugs!

Valsa George

Date: 9/8/2025 8:42:00 PM

'Tendrils of dawn' on a joy ride! Wow.... what wonderful imagination. Hearty Congratulations, Sam on your trophy win.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/17/2025 11:33:00 AM

Dearest Valsa, your note of congratulations was a joy ride for my heart! Thank you! Inspiration just seems to flow as I watch morning wrap its arms around the hills, valleys and skies especially as I am basically a night person!. Sending blessings of beauty for each morning!

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/8/2025 5:03:00 PM

My Dearest Rhyme Time Friend, I’m so pleased to extend my heartiest and heartfelt congratulations to you for your shining trophy win in Brian’s contest. Your vibrant yet tender sunrise imagery is, indeed, a joy ride for my heart and imagination. Such an exquisite couplet, my sweet poetry sis.. your golden pen shines with the beauty of your soulful and appreciative poet’s soul. Warmest wishes sent on golden rays of sunrise.. ~Susan

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/17/2025 11:29:00 AM

My Dearest Rhyme Time Friend, your note of congratulations was like sunshine on a fall day! Thank you!! I love to just stand in awe as ambers, mauves and saffron weave their magic around hillsides and through the skies on a clear fall morning. It is always a delight to share these moments of quiet bliss as morning opens her treasures! The win in Brian's contest was sheer delight and so wonderful to share. Sending you amber blessings on the wings of morning, sweet poetry sis!

I Am Anaya

Date: 9/8/2025 1:05:00 PM

Congratulations on a trophy win, Sam! Fabulous imagery xX

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/17/2025 11:18:00 AM

Good morning, Anaya! Thank you! Misty autumn mornings are such a source of inspiration! Hope all is well! Blessings!

Dr. Vandana Sharma

Date: 9/8/2025 10:09:00 AM

Congratulations on the first placement.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/11/2025 11:20:00 AM

Greetings Dr. V! Thank you so much for your note of congratulations !

Len Gasun

Date: 9/7/2025 5:35:00 AM

Exquisite picture painted by your creative words my dearest poet friend Sam! Thanks a lot for sharing! Best winning wishes for you always! I'm sorry again for my late visit 'coz of my school workload lately. Looking forward for sem break, so I'll have more time to visit you all here. Again thank you so much, Good luck and God bless! Hugs

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/11/2025 11:19:00 AM

Greetings Dear Len! Your sweet notes are always welcome and I thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment! As fall term has just started I understand time constraints! So glad you could share in the joy of this moment in the life of dawn! All the best sweet poet friend! Blessings!!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/6/2025 6:20:00 AM

excellent...imagery is outstanding, especially 'tendrils of dawn.' best wishes in the contest

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/6/2025 12:47:00 PM

Hi Sara! Thank you! Have to admit your couplet inspired me! So grateful! And so much fun to create imagery! Have a wonderful weekend! Blessings and hugs!