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1410 Rhyme Time - New Untitled  9-5-25
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Thin layers of amber curl around hillsides
Tendrils of dawn on a sunrise joy ride.

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Len Gasun

Date: 9/7/2025 5:35:00 AM

Exquisite picture painted by your creative words my dearest poet friend Sam! Thanks a lot for sharing! Best winning wishes for you always! I'm sorry again for my late visit 'coz of my school workload lately. Looking forward for sem break, so I'll have more time to visit you all here. Again thank you so much, Good luck and God bless! Hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/6/2025 6:20:00 AM

excellent...imagery is outstanding, especially 'tendrils of dawn.' best wishes in the contest

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/6/2025 12:47:00 PM

Hi Sara! Thank you! Have to admit your couplet inspired me! So grateful! And so much fun to create imagery! Have a wonderful weekend! Blessings and hugs!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/5/2025 12:45:00 PM

What a lovely write you painted with your words. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a lovely day/weekend writing away............

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/6/2025 12:45:00 PM

Hi Paula! Thank you! So much fun to take words and make them a paint brush. Blessings to you!

Dr. Vandana Sharma

Date: 9/5/2025 12:21:00 PM

Mesmerising and a nice way to welcome the day.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/5/2025 7:52:00 PM

Thank you. Dawn is truly mesmerizing. All the best.