i submitted my poem
Blog Posted:7/20/2009 3:07:00 PM
<P><FONT size=4>I am going to submit my poem "Life Cycle" to the childrens magazine "Highlights for Kids" this is the letter i sen.t I am still editing it so some feedback would be great.</FONT></P>
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<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt">Hello my name is Steven, I am 16 years old. I have been writing poetry. I have a poem that I think would be good for your magazine entitled: Life Cycle do you think you would be interested in putting it in your magazine?</P>
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<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt">Life Cycle</P>
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<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt">The sidewalk ends into a ditch</P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt">From that ditch there grows a tree</P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt">The tree grows to its peak</P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt">From the peak of the tree </P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt">There is a nest</P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt">A bird’s nest</P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt">In the nest there are some eggs</P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt">Robin eggs</P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt">They hatch and out come baby Robbins</P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt">Mama bird feeds them worms</P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt">They learn to fly</P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt">They go to find their own tree to nest</P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt">Life cycle</P>
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