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I Love You

I love you The most love I’ve ever felt My love for you is true I love the cards that I’ve been dealt Why don’t you help me undo my belt?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/22/2009 9:48:00 PM
remember your just sixteen but i'm not going to rue on your feelings of love :P enjoy it n.n
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Date: 7/20/2009 5:04:00 PM
so sixteen steve. Maybe you should have written....."let me help you undo your belt>......"
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Date: 7/20/2009 4:57:00 PM
awwwww do not rise (wink) to the bait! Light & Love
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Date: 7/20/2009 3:14:00 PM
Guess we all have to undo our security belts when we are about to take a leap into love. I, too, am confined by a belt. As Emily Dickinson wrote: "The higher the flame has leaped, the colder and deader the ashes." Takes a brave soul to open their heart after being burned. Very nice, Steve! Love, Carolyn
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