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the parade

close your eyes
and visualize
a parade
imagine all the floats
and people marching
let go of all your thoughta
and watch them float away
today's the day
you'll be reborn
and sworn to independence
live a new life
don't let anyone stand in our way today
close your eyes
and visualize

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  1. Date: 7/18/2009 7:26:00 PM
    I like these lines: "live a new life/don't let anyone stand in our way today/close your eyes/and visualize" Good job, Steve. Brilliant images and outstanding message. Ruben.

  1. Date: 7/15/2009 8:24:00 PM
    I like your poetry, it is so "airy", fluid, light, and pretty solid in its shortness, which is amazing @.@ jojojoj I like this poem completely, specially the final lines, I think we should all take some time to stop being solid matter and transform into ideas every once in a while @.@ thanks for the experience =D