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sadness swallows me

Sadness swallows me
Darkness follows me
Light reflects me
People dissect me
Through my emotions
Drowning in the ocean

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  1. Date: 12/16/2009 11:44:00 AM
    nice rhyming. jhl

  1. Date: 12/16/2009 1:50:00 AM
    why every heartaches hurt? it's more affected to our mind then when we are happy. love this write. peace.

  1. Date: 12/15/2009 12:51:00 PM
    Many congratulations on your poetry being featured on the Soup this week >> James

  1. Date: 12/15/2009 2:32:00 AM
    Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A well deserving honor. A. W. Nutter

  1. Date: 12/14/2009 5:49:00 PM
    Powerful message captured in concise form. The emotion comes through your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 12/14/2009 8:19:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured at PoetrySoup this week Steve. May you have many more features. Love,Carol

  1. Date: 12/14/2009 5:02:00 AM
    i feel your pain.congrats on being featured this week

  1. Date: 7/23/2009 9:30:00 AM
    P-ss on people who do not accept you as you are. Be YOU! nobody does it better. Vince

  1. Date: 7/22/2009 8:25:00 AM
    Sad, but great write....Aleera

  1. Date: 7/18/2009 7:34:00 PM
    A+....WoW!! I love it. Spectacular. Ruben.

  1. Date: 7/11/2009 2:38:00 PM
    i can feel you saddness, touches my soul . and james is right, it will lift in time. yvette

  1. Date: 7/11/2009 2:01:00 PM
    Sadly sadness has swallowed many a soul, treat sadness as a mist, eventually it lifts in time - - >>James