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Sadness Swallows Me

Sadness swallows me Darkness follows me Light reflects me People dissect me Through my emotions Drowning in the ocean

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John Loving Iii

Date: 12/16/2009 11:44:00 AM

nice rhyming. jhl

Mony Reyna

Date: 12/16/2009 1:50:00 AM

why every heartaches hurt? it's more affected to our mind then when we are happy. love this write. peace.

James Fraser

Date: 12/15/2009 12:51:00 PM

Many congratulations on your poetry being featured on the Soup this week >> James

Anthony Nutter

Date: 12/15/2009 2:32:00 AM

Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A well deserving honor. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit

Date: 12/14/2009 5:49:00 PM

Powerful message captured in concise form. The emotion comes through your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/14/2009 8:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured at PoetrySoup this week Steve. May you have many more features. Love,Carol

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 12/14/2009 5:02:00 AM

i feel your pain.congrats on being featured this week

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 7/23/2009 9:30:00 AM

P-ss on people who do not accept you as you are. Be YOU! nobody does it better. Vince

Aleera De La Keur

Date: 7/22/2009 8:25:00 AM

Sad, but great write....Aleera

Yvette Deem

Date: 7/11/2009 2:38:00 PM

i can feel you saddness, touches my soul . and james is right, it will lift in time. yvette

James Fraser

Date: 7/11/2009 2:01:00 PM

Sadly sadness has swallowed many a soul, treat sadness as a mist, eventually it lifts in time - - >>James