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can you feel it?

You're getting old
Can you feel it?
Its getting cold
Can you feel it?

Houses shivering
Pizzas delivering
Young male quivering
Can you feel it?

Life is love
Love is death
Whispering secrets
Under your breath
Can you feel it?

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  1. Date: 1/23/2010 2:23:00 PM
    INteresting read, Steve!

  1. Date: 8/8/2009 6:58:00 PM
    Where have you been, miss your poetry...Karla

  1. Date: 7/30/2009 6:16:00 PM
    this one is really good, it feel it has more meaning to me. very good!

  1. Date: 7/28/2009 6:36:00 PM
    Pretty good poem

  1. Date: 7/28/2009 4:40:00 AM
    Yes, Steve, I feel it. Very poetic your passage: Whispering secrets under your breath! Gert

  1. Date: 7/27/2009 8:56:00 AM
    Great poem Steve, Yes I can feel it....Bill

  1. Date: 7/26/2009 3:37:00 AM
    love can be good and bad it alwas comes with both.

  1. Date: 7/25/2009 7:54:00 AM
    Nice use of rhyme, Steve, and I think we can all "feel" the effects of getting older. Interesting transition from life to love to death. Well done. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 7/24/2009 8:43:00 PM
    Very good Steve, i can fell it and i can dig it. sorry i have to disagree with you in one line...Life is love Love is is life-loving life is the rest man-you're great Steve. Diogenes