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Can You Feel It?

You're getting old Can you feel it? Its getting cold Can you feel it? Houses shivering Pizzas delivering Young male quivering Can you feel it? Life is love Love is death Whispering secrets Under your breath Can you feel it?

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/23/2010 2:23:00 PM

INteresting read, Steve!

Karla Null

Date: 8/8/2009 6:58:00 PM

Where have you been, miss your poetry...Karla

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 7/30/2009 6:16:00 PM

this one is really good, it feel it has more meaning to me. very good!

Monique Mcmiller

Date: 7/28/2009 6:36:00 PM

Pretty good poem

Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/28/2009 4:40:00 AM

Yes, Steve, I feel it. Very poetic your passage: Whispering secrets under your breath! Gert

Bill Doggett

Date: 7/27/2009 8:56:00 AM

Great poem Steve, Yes I can feel it....Bill

Shirin Neshat

Date: 7/26/2009 3:37:00 AM

love can be good and bad it alwas comes with both.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/25/2009 7:54:00 AM

Nice use of rhyme, Steve, and I think we can all "feel" the effects of getting older. Interesting transition from life to love to death. Well done. Love, Carolyn