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Walking in the forest
Very dark and gloomy
Looking for own personal florist
Meadows of flowers we will see

One for you 
And one for me
You pick blue
I pick green

We see the flower master
Very big and broad
It was a disaster
He was very awed

“Put back the flowers you have chosen”
The florist is a cannibal
The florist will be closin’
He treats us like animals

Leave the florist this very instant
Leaving now we must
Found out the masters name is Winston 
We left him in the dust

We went home empty handed
Back to home we go
We left the master stranded
We take our time and go real slow

We reach the house at last
Dinner is ready
We can’t remember our past
Eating very steady

Broccoli and mashed potatoes
That’s our dinner meal
It’s not very good though
It’s better than a seal

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  1. Date: 6/13/2010 8:46:00 AM
    Congratulations on being featured. Great job! Joseph

  1. Date: 6/12/2010 12:13:00 PM
    Hey! Congrats on having you wonderful poem being featured this week, keep your pens flowing with passion. You are such a great writer! Love , Adeleke

  1. Date: 6/9/2010 10:53:00 AM
    Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Janette

  1. Date: 6/7/2010 8:41:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved featured poetry this week Steve. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/6/2010 2:38:00 PM
    Nice use of rhyme. Interesting perspective. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 7/18/2009 7:28:00 PM
    Awesome rhyme, fantastic images, great know how to do it! Keep writing. Ruben.

  1. Date: 7/12/2009 4:19:00 PM
    Steve, nice work and welcome to poetry soup...Raul

  1. Date: 7/11/2009 10:50:00 PM
    Hey! Great adventure to... You are such a promising poet, please keep writing...sharing your thoughts with us. Best wishes with your writings. Great you Steve ! Adeleke