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deep blue sea

Epic life
Passed down by thee
Creatures of the deep blue sea

In the water
Splish and splash
Trying to avoid a shark attack

At the beach we play in the sand
Ahoy ahoy 
Thank god for land

Crystal castles 
Made by thee
Creatures of the deep blue sea

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  1. Date: 7/28/2009 6:38:00 PM
    Love the deep blue sea. Blue is great!

  1. Date: 7/23/2009 8:38:00 AM
    Beautiful Steve. Excellent writing. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/20/2009 11:34:00 PM
    interesting has a rhythmic story line and a very simple but puzzeling answer that i can't put my finger on just yet...simplicity is the hardest thing to uncover....really nice write and interesting! its worth being read twice... Ciara=)

  1. Date: 7/20/2009 7:17:00 PM
    at one with the waters that pass through our life, nice! jim

  1. Date: 7/18/2009 7:09:00 PM
    Good rhyme and a playful rhythm. Great job, Steve.

  1. Date: 7/18/2009 6:42:00 PM
    This poem has a nice rhythm, Steven. And I love the refrence to "crystal castles" in the last verse. Good work! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 7/17/2009 2:28:00 PM
    Nice flow of words. Beautiful poem. :)

  1. Date: 7/17/2009 10:46:00 AM
    crystal castles-beautiful imagery--great write my new friend--charma

  1. Date: 7/16/2009 10:16:00 PM
    always like things from the deep blue sea :} good poem

  1. Date: 7/16/2009 4:35:00 PM
    Very nice poem

  1. Date: 7/16/2009 3:19:00 PM
    I like this one a lot, i kind of makes me feel happy, it's really good i like it.