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Viper Poison

Viper poison in the ocean Viper poison keeps me in motion Feel the sting on an open wound So much blood to fill balloon Viper poison in my brain Viper poison is no game Burning sensation A proclamation Viper poison here and there Viper poison everywhere Hurts real bad Drives people mad Viper poison through the eyes Viper poison never dies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/19/2010 2:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Steve. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/23/2009 9:35:00 AM
Stay in this poetry soup community and you might develop an immunity. Geez, I'm a poet and don't know it. Have a geat day, Steve. Vince
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Date: 7/11/2009 10:55:00 PM
Great rhymes, wonderful flow. Keep the flag flying Steve! Thril us from far distance, you've got time & chance. Adeleke
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Date: 7/11/2009 7:58:00 PM
Good rhyme flow. jm
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Date: 7/11/2009 3:06:00 PM
Interesting Rhyme. Sara
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