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thunder storms

Boom crack flash
Turns trees to ash
Animals running in a dash
Causes cars to crash

Boom boom boom 
Lights up the room
A golfer’s doom
It’ll be over soon

Bang bang bang
Loud as a train
There’s a loud clang
Sharp as a viper’s fang

Roar roar roar
Sounds like a boar
The earth’s inner core
Cracks the back door

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  1. Date: 7/18/2009 9:28:00 PM
    This poem is good humor, describes the storm, very well, God bless, Moses

  1. Date: 7/18/2009 9:09:00 PM
    Great flow... -Alley

  1. Date: 7/18/2009 7:02:00 PM
    Very creative, Steve. A "sounding" piece. I like the rhyme you've creates. Ruben.

  1. Date: 7/18/2009 11:30:00 AM
    Steve, this a fun, exciting, imaginative rhyme! great work! jim

  1. Date: 7/17/2009 7:15:00 PM
    Wow, Steve. This has the powerful imagery and impact of a Carl Sandburg write -- and he's one of my favorites. Just last week a teen died when lightning caused a tree to crash upon her car. During the same storm a nearby home burned to the ground. Florida is the "lightning capital" of the world and you can certainly light up the sky with this write! Love, Carolyn