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Floating Away

Waiting fading and floating away I sit and wait to pass this day The sky is purple The sun is red Upon summoning the peaceful dead Do your fingers itch? Are you pistol whipped? The ground is white The trees are yellow The other day I met a nice fellow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/15/2009 8:09:00 PM
Wow, I like this poem, the second stanza reminds me a lot to Syd Barret and his chaotic lyrics jojojojo love it, truly love it!!!=) thanks for the experience @.@ =D
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Date: 7/15/2009 8:38:00 AM
good poem it has a rhyme to it so maybe the form is one type of ryhme poems not sure which one for I myself don't know much about poetry to be honest this site is actually helping me learn how to write different poems and learn about them. thanks for your comment
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