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elephants and big giraffes

Trapped in the forest
Elephants and big giraffes
I am really scared

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  1. Date: 7/23/2009 9:28:00 AM
    Be careful of elephants that drive cars. You neve know what they have in their trunk. God Bless. Vince

  1. Date: 7/18/2009 5:44:00 PM
    Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 7/15/2009 5:28:00 PM
    Too bad they can't stay in the forest instead of getting trapped in zoos !!! Wonderful haiku here, Steve and a nice selection to be a feature this week at the Soup! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 7/15/2009 8:22:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poem being featured this week.

  1. Date: 7/14/2009 2:21:00 PM
    steve, congrats on your feature...Raul

  1. Date: 7/13/2009 7:01:00 PM
    great feature! Steve! and thanks for your kind comments! jim (pss.. keep up the great poetry!)

  1. Date: 7/13/2009 5:10:00 PM
    how do you know ive been featured? im new here lol

  1. Date: 7/13/2009 4:45:00 PM
    I love this one! congrats on being featured this week as well!

  1. Date: 7/13/2009 3:55:00 PM
    Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Steve. Wow you got your poems reposted before the features that is wonderful. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/13/2009 1:56:00 PM
    Sounds like a childhood nightmare. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing! Thank you for sharing your thought with us and for your kind comment on my poem. Karen

  1. Date: 7/13/2009 10:45:00 AM
    Wooow! Short but lovely. Congratulations. Ernilando

  1. Date: 7/12/2009 10:12:00 PM
    Wow, Great flow of words, this is a very passionate piece. Congrats on your awesome poem being featured this week. You are an incredible poet, please keep writing. Best wishes with your writings. Adeleke

  1. Date: 7/12/2009 7:52:00 PM
    Congratulations on being featured this week, Steve. Excellent haiku. Ruben.

  1. Date: 7/11/2009 8:16:00 PM
    Hannibal rode on an elephant; giraffes are as gentle as can be. Don't be afraid of these creatures because of their size. I do like the imagery, I can't say "I' am really scared." You have a delightful sense of humor, Steve, and the haiku form is perfect. Once again, you make a very welcome addition to Poetry Soup. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 7/11/2009 3:12:00 PM
    I love your Haiku and humor. Sara

  1. Date: 7/11/2009 2:36:00 PM
    Great hiaku Steve nice 5/7/5 flow...Raul

  1. Date: 7/11/2009 1:59:00 PM
    Nice Haiku Steve, big as they are - they are as much in awe as we are of them, its just that we are more dangerous>>James