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  1. Date: 7/18/2009 7:18:00 PM
    Now, we're getting complex...Great, I like it. You can take the word "are" in second line, (5,7,5 syllables) Ruben.

  1. Date: 7/16/2009 4:45:00 PM
    Nice Haiku. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 7/16/2009 3:47:00 PM
    Interesting perspective of contrast to give the reader something to think about. Much said in just three lines. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen

  1. Date: 7/15/2009 8:04:00 PM
    Well, that line was unexcepted jojojo @.@ from nature all the way to motorization, yei!!!=D=D I like they way everything is suddenly opposed jojo thanks for the experience=D