Alone

Alone In a graveyard By a tombstone Where I should be Unfortunately For me I survived the black sea Life is the trophy Causing my misery I wanted to leave Earth at birth I was supposed to I was six weeks early Why can’t I leave now queen bee? Please answer me I’m stuck here unwillingly Its hurting me

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Jordan Mccallum

Date: 7/28/2009 12:51:00 AM

Beautiful poem Steve. Very unique in the sense that it dosen't follow a regular rule of poetry. Thanks for your feedback on recent release. Keep up the good work. Jordan.

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 7/23/2009 9:27:00 AM

It's not so much the quality of life but what you do with the life you are given. The larger the mountain, the greater the accomplishment. Keep climbing. Vince

Samantha Loveless

Date: 7/20/2009 9:47:00 PM

wow thats extreme!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/14/2009 11:22:00 AM

I do not undersatnd why you don't want to be here. I know heaven is going to be beautiful but God put us here because he had things he wanted us to do. He is not going to let you leave until you have done them. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 7/11/2009 1:58:00 PM

Dark writings Steve, nicely written>>James