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I live in rural New Hampshire with my wife  (Tracie) and two Mini Dachshunds. The kids are grown and on their own. Tracie is an intensive needs special education teacher (K to 2) and I am a retired insurance executive and attorney, and now a house husband. I love to cook, but don't much care for lawn work- so it gives me an excuse to try writing poetry!

In college I majored in English with an emphasis on poetry (no composition). Most of my courses were on the Romantic poets but I had the wonderful opportunity to study modern poetry under Richard Eberhart. We'd meet at his home on Monday evenings, his wife would serve cider and cake donuts, and he would share his memories of Yeats, Auden, Frost, Gibran and many others. He loved the poetry of GM Hopkins, and would read with vigor the last six lines from "Gods Grandeur". I loved those days and always wanted to try writing poem, but never did. 

 Well, it's now been almost 50 years, so it's time to start! If I could write one poem of note, it would be like Frost's Birches. But if I could write two, the second would be like Tennyson's Ulysses.

Grandmother's poems

Blog Posted by Richard Jordan: 11/24/2015 8:18:00 AM

What to do with Grandmother’s poems?

 

More than 25 years ago I inherited a cardboard box of my Grandmother Ethyl’s poems and essays. Some were published. Most were not.  Most were written from the 1930s to the late 1950s.  I had them re-typed and assembled into a chap book that is around 200 pages.  I then had 25 copies made and gave them to relatives.  They are, in my estimation, too good to languish unread. So I am turning to all of you for thoughts on how best to share them with the world.

 

Below are two examples of unpublished poems that are perhaps relevant during these times of trouble. The first, a Villanelle, since I think that format so hard to master and the subject timeless and appropriate now:

 

Villanelle For Tomorrow

 

The weaver of our destiny

Plies shuttle at her threaded loom:

She weaves a fragile dream for me.

 

Its fabric hints of prophecy;

Clairvoyant, she sees through our gloom—

The weaver of our destiny—

 

A world in which no jealousy

Nor greed nor power may yet find room;

She weaves a fragile dream for me.

 

She visions larger history

Where nuclear fission spells no doom—

The weaver of our destiny.

 

Among mankind with probity

The flower of racial love will bloom—

She weaves a fragile dream for me.

 

With plausible identity

Throughout the dream there moves a Form;

The weaver of our destiny

She weaves a fragile dream foe me.

 

 

Next, an untitled Christmas poem, that I share,  with all the best wishes for the holiday seasons.

 

Were I there in Judea too

That night and saw the star

I might, in curiosity

Have walked perhaps as far

As others trudging to the Inn

To lodge the night, if able,

But doubt when all is said and done

I would have sought the stable.

 

For signs and wonders should not point

To simple happenings;

 

How could I know God would anoint

A child born in a manger?

 

Yet now I sense what Mary knew

When she came on her hour

What the soft-eyed cattle and the few

Wise men felt---that power

 

Of the then unspoken Word

To me and the world, a stranger.

 



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Date: 12/3/2015 1:07:00 PM
- Grandmother's precious diamonds ... amazing !!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/24/2015 4:07:00 PM
These are so wonderful. If each of us were able to leave such a legacy behind, what an honor it would be to know they are cherished by the ones we have left behind.
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Date: 11/24/2015 2:14:00 PM
post away on your page and credit your grandmother - share her talent with the soup world:-) I understand my maternal grandmother wrote poetry - how I wish I had her poems to read and to post on soup :-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/24/2015 9:06:00 AM
I find both poems to be excellent. Myself, not a big fan of the Villanelle, yet her poem made up for it. Second poem strikes me even deeper and its a rare gem my friend. Not sure that you shouldn't title it yourself for your grandmother. I would were it me.
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